|Reviews for She's The Sweetest Drug|
| Mattricole chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Seems like a story with potential, I find it rather hilarious.
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
UWE HEE HEE, THIS IS BECOMING A REALLY GOOD STORY, HOPE TO SEE YOU SOON, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| Dogbert is cool chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
1. Please don't make every word in bold. Have the story in regular type, and have what you directly say to the readers in bold. WHAT YOU ARE DOING NOW IS JUST LIKE WHEN PEOPLE USE ALL CAPS FOR EVERYTHING AND IT GETS VERY ANNOYING AS YOU CONTINUE READING.
2.I noticed some awkward phrases like,"Never at once did her eyes left mine." This should be, "never once did her eyes leave mine."
Here are some more:
I mean, why do we need to make our beds when we’re going to sleep on them back, anyway? Everything we do in our life is like a cycle. I was too distracted to care about those stuffs, though.
Oh, yeaa. Wait a minute, what the hell did I just said?
My hand passed, then, passed over something.
Every guys have wet dreams.
3. You misspelled "Kairi" on the second to last paragraph.
Please fix these problems before continuing, or at least don't make them again. Always review your work because it is rarely perfect, speaking from experience.
| Trainalf chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
| Live.Life.With.Music chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
That was so cute! A little wierd but cute. Make more!
The wierd part that, he wet himself?