|Reviews for Diary Of A Madman|
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 10 . 8/15/2009
Wait! Albert? As in Albert Wesker? Wow, this story just gets better and better with every chapter! Now before I rant on about that, I've got to make sure it was Wesker XD. Anyway, they are working together it seems, how interesting. I had to laugh at the 'buddy' comment and how Albert threatened to kill Joe XD. The beginning was cute! Ada has her first taste of what morning sickness is like and well it sucks lol. It was cute how she didn't want Leon to see her doing that. It was even cuter when Leon held her hair for her. I can just picture that whole scene in the bathroom lol. They totally underestimated Rebecca. She escaped but she kicked their arse in the process? Good for her! Now who could this mangled up body be? And what could Joe and Albert be planning exactly? Can't wait to find out! And hell to the no! This chapter was awesome so don't talk crap about it XD. Wonderful job once again! Really!
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 9 . 8/15/2009
Yes, you're definitely right about the love that Ada and Leon share and even though you didn't make a lemon out of it, it was pretty powerful. It was perfect! The scene with his father was a very nice touch. Oh and his mother passed away, how sad :(. Glad to see Rebecca is okay and I understand what she means all too well about seeing too many horror movies and hearing things about hitch hikers lol. Well at least she is safe now. On and poor Carlos, hes fallen victim to the madman, sucks. I wonder who could be next. Guess I'll have to read on to find out XD. Loved the chapter! Excellent job like always Rev!
| MarnaLouw89 chapter 11 . 8/14/2009
I am so sorry for my late review,hun! I feel horrible! And you are sick! Geez *hugs ya tightly*
Oh what an awesome chapter! Geez,the big boom was so freaking awesome! I cannot wait for more! And once again Ashley finds herself in freaking trouble!
Great chap hun! I hope you get better soon!
| Cookie.Killer chapter 11 . 8/13/2009
awesome chapter! you're right, what's a Resident Evil story without an outbreak? nothing. thence, this chapter has been one of the best of the fic ). I love the action in a fic. gives the reader more intrigued and then, excited much more than just another genre (although, the romance is my favorite lol)
I also have many doubts (but I guess it will be clarified later), as how they solve the outbreak? (because in the prologue appears all that happened ... no?), What happened to Joe during the outbreak and how it caused?..Well, I guess these are things that will be solved gradually
ok, it's all. I did not realize the extensive commentary xD.
| Asgardian750 chapter 11 . 8/13/2009
Dude! I've been trying to reach you these past few days. But if your feeling bad we could leave it for another time.
Great chapter! Some action is nice! Four or five outbreaks hm...
GREAT WORK DUDE!
| there wont be a sequel chapter 10 . 8/9/2009
OMG WESKER HOLYCRAP.
That just, like... TOTALLY caught me by surprise! 0.0
I was just, like... "WOOAAHH WESKERR!"
Aside from that initial shocker... I don't know WHUT you're talking about. This chappie wasn't boring! I liked the beginning with Ada's morning sickiness and such XD Haha. And then... WESKER!
Great buildup for the next chappie, which I'm SO looking forward to! :)
(I apologize for the cruddy shortness of this review; my next one will be longer and better, promise! ;-; )
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 7 . 8/7/2009
Oh NO! Ada...I hope nothing happens to Ada. I'm worried about Ada and Leons the one whos in trouble XD. Okay! So, don't let anything happen to Leon! This has got to be a trap of some sort. Also Leon finally solved that riddle XD. Leon and Ada are adorable as always, gotta love it when you throw in their lovey doveyness (is that even a word?) towards eachother. Oh and the tiny scene with Claire and Leon at the beginning was a nice touch. Its nice to see that Claire approves of their happiness since at first she didn't. And he is just toying with Rebecca now isn't he? Thats awful but maybe she has a chance to get away. Anyway, super awesome chapter like always! Your writing is fabulous! LOVE IT! )
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
You know, I would've said that you were killing me with this cliffy BUT you have chapters already written XD. Brain Damage, I knew it sounded familiar and yes, it describes Joe fully indeed. I can't believe he is going to shoot Rebecca, thats just EVIL! After she got that riddle right too, although he didn't mention anything about her well being afterwards. I guess he is just too smart for Becca. Poor Rebecca, and she thinks of Billy while Joe is about to...kill her! *cries* sorry, its just that Billy died too and there have just been too many deaths :(. Oh gosh! Ada and Leon are SO darn cute together. Everytime they are together its MAGIC XD, seriously! They truly are perfect for eachother. Leave it to Ada to get Leon back to bed hehehe. This case seems to be consuming Leon. He really has no choice, does he. Anyway, loved this chapter! It was magnificent like always! Gotta read more XD!
| Cookie.Killer chapter 10 . 8/6/2009
why you say it was boring? i really think that it was very very good! like the other chapters lol
Well, I do not speak English so do not expect my comments to be very long.
XoXo & See u Later!
| MarnaLouw89 chapter 10 . 8/6/2009
Dear, you may call this boring and all, but i am totally in love with this chap! So funny! Leon making Ada throw up again and her threat towards him. Oh man! XD
Oh shit what the hell! Albert! Oh shit is gonna hit the fan!
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
I love how Leon comforts Ada during that not so fun moment. XD
*Puts up billboards and cheers for next chapter!* XDD
Thanx so much hun! Exactly what i needed after a horrible, hell-filled week! _
| Asgardian750 chapter 10 . 8/6/2009
Well you sure are right about that, your writing! Good chapter so Wesker is plotting something diabolical?
| there wont be a sequel chapter 9 . 8/4/2009
Ooh! Nummy Leon/Ada scene FTW! XP Seriously, it was lovely. :) I actually liked that you didn't turn it into a lemon, because I'm not a fan of those myself, and there are much, much better ways to show teh lurvs. PWP for the LOSE.
And, yup! No more Carlos, which means no more foxy accent to drive ladies wiild. Hahaha... poor Carlos. I'm not sure about poor ladies though... XDD
LOL Hitchhiking! Pretty risky thar Becky, especially after escaping the clutches of Mr. Psycho. It would be a twist if she died because she hitchhiked instead of by Joe's hand. I would lol. XP (I don't know why I'm being so mean in this review. Haha.)
Great chappie! :D
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 5 . 8/3/2009
Oh my! Billys dead Rebeccas captured, and Joes a psycho. Wow! I'm stunned! I really did like the bit of background you gave on Joes past. Those drunken sick pr!cks! How could they do that to her knowing she had a kid? Thats horrible. Not much time here but so far the story is super awesome! Your writing is magnificent and the details are perfect like always. Love it! I really do XD.
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 4 . 8/3/2009
LOL! Your a/n's are so darn funny XD. So it was Billy in the Iron maiden (ouch!), thats crazy! Well at least he has a pulse so hopefully hes okay. I like that the riddle was based off of a song, which by the way, is an awesome song XD. Good thing Ark called Leon about the riddles and how he met Joe or else Billy would've died a painful horrble death. I bet Leons kicking himself after finding out he let the killer slip between his fingers. Then again he didn't know at the time. What a nightmare for Leon to have! How sad to lose everything you love right before your very eyes but it was only a dream. How cute, he said it was a 'she' ). Anyway, another fantastic chapter written by you! Love it! Its getting really hard to tear myself away from this story now XD.
| Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 3 . 8/3/2009
Holy...T...Viruses! I! Uh! Wow! You said to expect twists and whatnot but this? Now this, just blew me the hell away! Poor poor Claire and Angela. At first I was siding with Leon because he seemed a bit confused with the info Hunnigan told him. How is it they know the ones missing were dead? And then it was explained AND then I got it XD. Again, poor Claire and Angela. Their death made me cringe...seriously! Very brutal but if you say they didn't feel a thing then at least it was painless. I don't blame Leon for watching Ada as she slept, shes a beauty. Heck, I'd be gay for her. *stares back at you* yeah, I said it. LMAO! Leon and Ada have awesome taste in music, Jimi Hendrix rocks! Ark was Claires boyfriend? Thats a first I've hear of that pairing. The whole scene where Leon opens the box to find the clamp with that note and riddles was flat out AWESOME how you did it! You did an excellent job with this chappy! Loved it! Next chapter D