|Reviews for 12 Days of Kigo|
| Love Robin chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Very nice bit of "fluff"!
I actually read both chapters on /Haven and was about to comment there that the scene changes weren't better designated, but then I looked here and found them in place, soo...
Do I see both sets of parents pushing their daughters together?
| angel0wonder chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Thats pretty impressive for being written in the last twenty hours, lol. Kepi it up, keep it up! I'm cheering for ya! :D
| don redmond chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Cute beginning. Whining Drakken and confused Shego. What more could you ask for? We also get Kim with a wicked sense of humor.
I'd do this as a multi-chapter story. That would give you the continuity to build the relationship in.
| Common Ninja chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
wow i really like the beginning of this story update soon
| Green Flashlight chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
I think that this is a very cute idea. I would like to know what you plan on doing plot wise with this, it has a lot of room to expand and I honestly have no idea where this will go. Anyways I do think that this is a very good fic so far, I want to see where it is going plot wise.
| Nonawolf chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
i absolutely cracked up while reading this! love it!
i think it would be an awesome mulit-chapter story but as the author, it's your call. update soon, please and thank you!
| 0xnaomix0 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Yes, this would be SO good as a multi-chapter story. It's so awesome, I absolutely LOVED this!
I felt a bit sorry for Drakken at the end, but the fluffy-ness of the story made up for it. hehe
Oh, I found a few errors in case you wanted to correct them:
"preparing to stomp Shego as she came out of her role."
-roll not role
"Kim rushed to kneel behind Shego and assumed the proper heilmich position."
-heimlich not heilmich
There weren't really a lot, so I don't think I missed much. I hope you don't take this as disliking your story, because I was only trying to make your amazing story even more amazinger (?) haha.
Wonderful work, I'll be looking forward to an update (on this an all of your works)!
| Kara chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
i LOVE THIS STORY! This has to be on of the better kim p. fics that I have read in a while. Mainly because of the silly.
there is a supprising lack of this level of silly in most kim p. fics. Keep up the good job
| fuzzibare chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
I really enjoyed "watching" the first chapter of this special chistmas episode of KP. (My highest praise!)
While I admit to being a Kigo shipper, I do hate to see Ron always getting dumped. So my to my fevered mind, it is entirely possible for Santa to leave something Red and Green under Ron's "Holiday" tree.
| Gryffindor620 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
LOL! I like it! I wanna see where this goes!
Update Soon Son!
| yui1808 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
damn, that was pathetic... drakken's always pathetic... how old is he again?
well author, thank you for making a new kigo story...
| Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
WUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I havent laugh so hard on any Christmas fic! I cant wait to see the other eleven chapters! XD
Poor Shego, heh, she is so gonna get even with Kim.
Invader Johnny Signing Off.
| List of Romantics chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
*Gasp* Is it really only two weeks till Christmas? Where does the time go?
Well Done! Very funny and cute, you've crafted a lovely piece of Holiday Cheer with the added bonus of H. -which makes EVERYTHING better. I nearly died when Kimmie went off like a giddy and hyper 9 year old, it made for a rather funny scene.
I hope you keep track with the days of Christmas, as I'm looking forward to reading more as the days pass.
| Slave2Writing chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Cute. looking forward to more
| xxDark Angel Babyxx chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
That was great! Please update soon!