Reviews for Beauty Withheld in Love
xhammahx chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Awwweh! 3
M.S DARK ANGEL chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
woaw!

THAT IS

FUCKIN

AWESOME!

*wipes drool*

wicked yaoi!

write more

plz! _
Keiko Sempai chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
one wordHOT!
ColoursInMotion chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Awsome! Really, it's the only way to describe it!

Well done!

Amy x
Danielle chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
OH. MY. GOSH. THAT WAS F*ING AWESOME! I LOVE SMEX. KEEP WRITING, YOU'RE GOOD AT STUFF LIKE THAT. IF YOU CAN, COULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING FOR URAHARA X GRIMMJOW (BLEACH ANIME/MANGA)? THERE ARE HARDLY ANY FAN FICS FOR THAT PAIRING.
Dotti55 chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
WHEW I need a shower now. Excellent job, that's one of the BEST lemons I've EVER read. WHEW
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
*whistles and claps* Need any more be said?
Poison'd chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
My only complaint exists in your word choice. The past tense of 'cum' is 'cummed', not 'came'.

Otherwise, this was beautiful! And another story that I can say was well worth the read. I haven't been writing in a while and, although in the beginning of my first draft, my story just decided to die during the sex phase...

Anyway, this was very inspirational and quite in tune with the reality of sex. Thank you for being another great help to my inspirational needs and my fantasies.

Love. _
Yeung Xing Wun chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
far too many commas