Reviews for The Storm
tast3the3RAiiNBOW chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
This story is beautifully written, with a wonderful plot line! Fantastic!
LittleCoward chapter 3 . 12/15/2008
Terrific chapter, I am sorry that I didn't read it sooner! I loved the hidden necklace. It adds some mystery to Jacob's character, I think. I also really enjoyed the verbal sparring and then the reasoning between Bella and her father. Well done!
AccoKi chapter 3 . 12/14/2008

awesome! XD

AccoKi chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
great! XD

AccoKi chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
awesome! XD

they die?


you can't kill edward!

star-girl62626 chapter 3 . 12/13/2008
I cna't believe this story didn't get at least 20 reviews!I'm so mad!But pls pls pls when will the be sum ExB?I'm deperate!But I reaili like the story!Update soon!
x-aly-x chapter 3 . 12/13/2008
a great chapter
travelchica chapter 3 . 12/13/2008
Ok so now i'm all upto date and still loving it. Can't wait to see the farm boy. I ove Princess bride and the farm boy is hotter :-)

Ok can't wait for mor. So glad you're writing again.

travelchica chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Hey Capella.

Loving the new story. The idea is great, i love period romance.

Yea, Seth's in it. And Jacob as the horrible prince. Well i'm off to read the rest. I'll R&R as i do.

Keep it up :)

x-aly-x chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
nice to have you writing again and i must say i do love your disclaimers they are so hilarious i love what you have written so far on this story is should be very interesting to read well done i look forward to more.

Love Aly
LittleCoward chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Exceptional for a follow-up chapter. I liked the line about Bella being a sacrifice waiting for a dagger to be plunged into her heart. Foreshadowing what was depicted in the prologue? I really enjoyed the entire introduction, (Love how you are depicting 'prince Jacob!') and I am on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter!
LittleCoward chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Hm, judging from what I've read so far, I may have a new favorite AU-AH twilight fanfic!

I love this story so far. Wish I had gotten on earlier to read the first chapter... Ah well. I've read it now, and I am glad that the second chapter is already up!

SO far, the story development is great, and I loved the prologue. (And yes Edward, you are a farmboy. Can't wait to see that! - I love your disclaimers!)
onceuponaswan28 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
I love yoyr disclaimers. They make me laugh. So far your story is very good. I feel so sorry for the girl in the story. And I have a feeling that itis not going to get any better for her. Keep up the good work.
star-girl62626 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
I like ur style of writin...pls update soon!I absolutely loved this idea...but is Edward goin to...DIE?
8Ri.LeE chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
omg this sounds like an amazingly interesting story! i mean seriously! i can't wait to read more, please please please update!
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