|Reviews for Pools of Compulsion|
| Matters of No Consequence chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Wow. I've got to say, that was by far, just the second JerichoKole story I've ever read. It was really really good. Mwahahah! The whole plot was...twisted? Hahah! Oh, come on, what are the chances that both of their dads were crazy maniacs? Seriously, I love the story. You left out a couple of commas, though. Nothing big. They're probably even correct, and I'm wrong(yeah..I use a lot of commas...obviously,).
THat was really sweet. It could actually develop into a chapter story...lots of stuff to write about in there.. Just an opinion! Hahah!
May GOD bless you!
| ThSamurai chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
First off, let me say again: Thank you very much for this fic. Wonderfully done! No wonder Joey and Kole make a great pair, both their fathers in some way went nuts with drugs! Sure I do like comedy, but this was great. It had just the right amount comedy for the type of story it was. The fact that he can't talk and she could understand his every word was a little confusing at first but I quickly caught on. Thanks again for the top notch fic!