Reviews for Twolight Retake
greasergirlalex chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
i really liked this story please continue, thanks
LaughsWithTears chapter 5 . 1/4/2009
I love it! The name Patrick will take some getting used to, because my uncles friends name is Patrick, and he ain't the prettiest person. JK!
becoming darkness chapter 5 . 1/4/2009
update update update update update update update!
The Duchess of Telmar chapter 5 . 1/4/2009
Aw I love you too D...uhh why is it dedicated to me again?

Yay she met Patrick! I was totaly frozen, waiting.

Hmm, I wonder what happened with Bella...

update soon, hope your all better now (and not just typing like mad to make us feel happy D)

The Duchess of Telmar chapter 4 . 1/4/2009
Sorry i didn't review, i don't think i got the alert!

omg was that teacher FLIRTING with them? *shudder*

i love alice, she was so helpful.

can't wait for them to meet the boys!

Superdani4Ever chapter 5 . 12/29/2008
Hope you get better soon!

Get some rest!
becoming darkness chapter 4 . 12/28/2008
eres on of te 25.
ANGELOFTHEBLACKROSES chapter 5 . 12/24/2008
aw...feel beter! HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
ToxicVixy chapter 4 . 12/21/2008
awesome story
VioletEmbry4ever chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
Patrick as Peter Pevensie!That's all I'm saying!

oh,and not a stedy boyfriend?A Cullen?That's just weird.

Not Twilight type.
D.Cullen chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
I don't like the description of Patrik.

It just seems strenge,doesn't fit on the Cullen besides hwe' s vampire!He'd scared of hurt any girl right?

And he's edwards BIOLOGICAL BROTHER!So he'll have to be super perfect like him!

I'm still in doubt aboyut his,but I'll give it a try.
Superdani4Ever chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
I don't know why but I don't like the info that alice gave her about Patric.

Ity just seems strange.

She sees the future right?So they're not going to end up together?

LaughsWithTears chapter 4 . 12/19/2008
I really like it. But the name you picked for Nickys will-be boyfriend is a bit less sexy than I what I had imagined, but I guess its better than Herbert. *shudder* :P
D.Cullen chapter 3 . 12/18/2008
I'll try AGAIN with this hope you won't let me down AGAIN
VioletEmbry4ever chapter 3 . 12/18/2008
ok,I'll give it another try to this story,AGAIN.

Is Anthony going to be there?
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