|Reviews for Warui Ookami|
| queenoftheoutlands chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Wow. This is awesome, so well thought out as well, what with the ties into the beginning of Bad Wolf and everything. The corrispondence between Agent Hanson and the other Agent was really great, as was Adam and Jack's letters. I liked Jack's "I hope someone buries you alive" seeing as ironically that does happen to both of them :)
| The Famous Fire Lady M chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
I love this.
I love you for writing this.
xD to what Jack said.
Adam is made of love.
I actually began a doctorwho/Heroes fanfic.
| Caellach Tiger Eye chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
This is an interesting idea, but poorly executed. The story was rather boring until the final scene because I couldn't really grasp the point of it all. It felt like it had an inconsistent pacing, and the report-like structure was dull and plodding. When you describe adventures, at least, it would be better to use dialogue to make the story more interesting. The idea of a Torchwood 'report' isn't bad, but if it comprises the majority of the story then it makes for dull reading. Just thought I'd let you know.
But the characters were accurately depicted and the situations were blissfully Whoversish. I really wish you luck with your next piece.