Reviews for Be Very Still
NicoleTwilight chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Great story! I really enjoyed it. Write more! :)
kelleegilmore chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
This is absolutely perfect.
Joyfulpie chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Thank you! Thank you! Perfect!
iDazzlePeople chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Ohemge darling that was beautiful. please keep writing more mushy stuff like this - it reminds me of my boyfriend and how sweet he can be. he's currently in AZ for spring break and i wont see him for quite some time... so you can entertain me )
cookiemomster2012 chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
LionAndLamb17 chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
THANK you for this story! It's amazingly, and more importantly, tastefully written, as opposed to a few other versions of Edward and Bella's first night on Isle Esme. You are a very talented writer!
meclipse chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Thank you so much. You kept to the characters perfectly (are you really SM?). Beautifully written. Hope you write more
scarletpastel chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
This short missing chapter I read at least once a week. Thank you for writing it. It was everything I was missing. It is the only story that fits the gap in the book. Stephanie would be proud!
Lauren Scott chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I loved this version of Bella and Edward's honeymoon. It's certainly what I was looking for to fill in the blanks that Stephenie left in the book. Thanks for pretty much describing what I imagined in my mind and putting it down for others to read.
Jesse'sLove chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
OMG you are a wonderful writer, this is a great story!

Awesome... Thankyou for taking the time to write it.
itidiot chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
You did a beautiful job with this story. You must write more!
Angiep1982 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009

I just wanted to tell you how much my group and I enjoyed your "missing honey moon" scene. It is definitely proof that could have done the honeymoon scene in good taste yet still catering to her older fan base.

I wanted to share with you some comments from my group:

Angelique wrote:

*fantastic.. this is what we were missing :P

I need a cold*

Zoe wrote:

*I know i was woried about the porn effect, but not at all, stephenie definately could have put it in the book, or in a special 18 edition or something.*

Julz wrote:


that was so well done!

i don't need to read any others(fanfiction) that was enough for me!*

Whit wrote:

*oh my gah..**

vanessa wrote:

*OK...I am SPEECHLESS! Words cannot describe how talented that writer is. I am in shock. That was the BESt sex scene I have ever read...not skankafied, not pornafied just classy and sophisticated...I think I need a cigarette...No no, I don't smoke...but I need one. As I read it, I swear, I felt joke, I saw me with Edward...

OH MY GOD! Insane! Speechless!*

And finally francoise wrote:

**this is totally awesome... I so need a cold shower! should have been in the book or at least should be in the movie :P**

Just wanted to say great job... you filled the void!

Thanks :)
captainrach chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
deletingyouraccountishard chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
This is so well written! It would have fit perfectly in the book. Not too smutty, just enough, and sweet and romantic and everything that was missing in that spot! This is my fave wedding night interpretation yet.
fabfiveoh chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
You captured the love and desire these characters have for each other. Lots of passionate sizzle with no smut - Stephenie Meyer style. Beautifully done. More please.
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