Reviews for Be Very Still
dvshipper chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
This is so...them! The part in the water...*sigh* And it's perfect that Bella biting him is what causes him to destroy the pillows. *faints*
Phantom-writer3739 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
that was very good. tastful and sensual. very faithful to the book and what few details we were given. it was also very well written and it flowed very well. (did that last bit make sense?)

all in all an excellent piece, especially for your first foray into fanfiction.
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