|Reviews for Resurgence|
| GallonsoftheStuff chapter 27 . 10/8/2015
I keep thinking little comments while I read, but kind of forget about them by the time I get to the end of the chapter, moving on to the next without leaving a review with my thoughts. Even though I very much intend to while I'm reading and thinking. But right now... I remember and can't help but comment.
Bella, if I never realized this in the books (admittedly, I haven't read them in... several years), is completely... pathetic. Well, maybe not COMPLETELY. But the way she latches onto first Edward and now Peter, forming herself around them, making them mean so much to her that without them she falls apart... it's so unhealthy. It drives me nuts. She's mature for her age, and yet she has this extremely teenage fallacy of thought where she thinks she can't exist in happiness without this connection to another person, without "her man" so to speak. It's a completely in character flaw of hers, but I hate it. Makes me want to think of the line from Teen Wolf (the show) "Be your own anchor." And makes me wish Bella knew it.
On another note, while Jacob is very in character as well... I find myself missing him actually being Bella's FRIEND. Because he was. Even if he wanted to be something more, he was her friend, and I miss that. Seeing a Bella who doesn't care about him makes me sad.
Claire, I don't think we see enough for me to judge well of she's greatly in character. The bits involving Sylar at least are.
I find it a bit hard to believe that Peter would care about Bella the way he does when she acts so needy - but then I remind myself that there's a decent amount of interaction between them that happened "behind-the-scenes". Still, I don't see Peter appreciating just how needy Bella is, even if his hero complex likes being needed. The "Don't leave; I'll die if you leave," doesn't seem like his type.
Okay, now that I've sort of criticized the heck out of what I've read so far... I really AM enjoying this fic. Sylaire (inaccurate ship name in my case, because it's more GABRIEL/Claire that I love) is my OTP, but given author's notes and how you've set this up, I guess there won't be any of that. Still, enjoying it. Cullens not featuring in this one is something of a disappointment, but you've got sequels, so I guess they'll be here eventually? No need to actually answer that, since I'll be continuing reading (will Sylar/Gabriel show up again, I wonder; HE'S the one who kept Peter from dying from the fall out the window in canon, plus the redemption arc in season four seems pretty permanent to me, so I'm vaguely hoping my favorite Heroes character pops up again somewhere).
Kudos for a well written and entertaining tale - I look forward to finishing it.
| litanolastar chapter 33 . 1/26/2015
| Guest chapter 33 . 11/26/2013
very good, loved
| tlyxor1 chapter 33 . 11/8/2013
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
Um... Im loving this story, but I have one comment. Why didnt it occur to Bella that she DOES have one huge ability... Edward couldnt read her mind. He made a huge deal of explaining all about how hed never encountered a mind like hers before. That could obviously be part of her ability.
| I love twilight bella Whitlock chapter 33 . 10/7/2012
i like it keep me updated
| Miss Snazzy chapter 33 . 3/20/2012
Great chapter, though Bella's attempt to avoid telling Peter and Claire what happened to her was rather annoying. I understand her hesitation, but that doesn't make it less annoying. I can't wait for Bella to reveal the rest of her story.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 32 . 3/20/2012
Great chapter. Wow. Loved Bella's escape.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 31 . 3/20/2012
Good chapter. I think the way you handled Bella was fine... I mean, when you think about it, she was really only the damsel in distress because they made her be. She didn't have the means to stand up to a vampire and even if she did, the Cullens were all about keeping her out of harm's way. And still, she managed to escape Alice and Jasper to meet James in Twilight. Also, remember how Bella distracted Victoria by cutting her hand in Eclipse? That was pretty brave. I think that given the right motivation, like protecting the people she loves, Bella would be capable of just about anything. Spending time with such strong characters like Peter and Claire would've only strengthened that.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 30 . 3/20/2012
Good chapter. I'm glad Bella didn't reveal everything to Elle... Even if I wish she'd become an ally.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 29 . 3/20/2012
Good chapter. I liked that Bella addressed the irony of Peter's human family being more dangerous than Edward's vampire one. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 28 . 3/20/2012
Good chapter. Holy crap, Bella can be kind of dumb sometimes. Of all the times to call Peter... I can't wait to see what will happen next.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 27 . 3/20/2012
Good chapter. It's too bad Peter didn't put his invisibility to better use. They might've been able to avoid Charlie. Lol.
| Miss Snazzy chapter 26 . 3/19/2012
Great chapter. I liked the attention to Bella's trauma over dying. I also loved the interaction between Bella and Peter at the end. However, that author's note at the bottom has me worried. 0_0
| Miss Snazzy chapter 25 . 3/19/2012