Reviews for Untitled
AllisonIsAllison chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Hi,

The story is very good, but I do suggest a beta. Not only can they help you with the paragraph spacing, but they can give you some ideas for your writers block. I'm a beta, so if you want I could help you out. The story IS great, though! I mean, when you're writing a story it's very hard to edit it since you've already spent so much time writing. Thank you for reading!

The Green-Skinned Witch
Cecelia3125 chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
cool I would LOVE an edward pov.

liz
Valkyrie War Cry chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
First, you need formating skills. Second, title it. Third, INVOLVE FRICKING VAMPIRES BECAUSE TWILIGHT WOULDN'T EXIST IF THERE WEREN'T ANY. I'm not even bothering to read this.
A Rose Petal chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
good start.
courtlovesyou-xoxo chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
Its really good

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I like it,

a lot

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hope to see chapter 3 soon!

Oh,

and,

this is just a suggestion to how i read,

but maybe you should make your paragraphs shorter,

they seem really long.

its just a suggestion.

But its a good story so far,

i want it to start getting really good

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