|Reviews for Untitled|
| AllisonIsAllison chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
The story is very good, but I do suggest a beta. Not only can they help you with the paragraph spacing, but they can give you some ideas for your writers block. I'm a beta, so if you want I could help you out. The story IS great, though! I mean, when you're writing a story it's very hard to edit it since you've already spent so much time writing. Thank you for reading!
The Green-Skinned Witch
| Cecelia3125 chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
cool I would LOVE an edward pov.
| Valkyrie War Cry chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
First, you need formating skills. Second, title it. Third, INVOLVE FRICKING VAMPIRES BECAUSE TWILIGHT WOULDN'T EXIST IF THERE WEREN'T ANY. I'm not even bothering to read this.
| A Rose Petal chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
| courtlovesyou-xoxo chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
Its really good
I like it,
hope to see chapter 3 soon!
this is just a suggestion to how i read,
but maybe you should make your paragraphs shorter,
they seem really long.
its just a suggestion.
But its a good story so far,
i want it to start getting really good