Reviews for a new power
WTFisWrongWithYou chapter 3 . 12/29/2008
Dude not to destroy your self confidence or anything but you really need to get a beta reader. It would make your stories a hundred times better if the reader didn't have to decipher what you were trying to say as we would be a little less distracted.
RANMACAT chapter 3 . 12/29/2008
you are a tease. up date soon pleas.
Thanos Farek Seid chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
humm, well, all i can say is write more, is a good beginning, but i nee d a little more.

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