|Reviews for unexpected|
| Confused chapter 1 . 1/10
I think you made a mistake... you changed the children's names from Charlotte to Charlie, and Jared to Jordan...? please fix this... "/
| arrancarstar chapter 8 . 2/7/2012
Pleeeaaaaassssse don't give up in this! This is one of the first Jasper OC stories that I have read that isn't a load of crap! I'm begging you here! PLEASEE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SEXY AND NAMED JASPER, KEEP WRITING!
| dulcesiita chapter 8 . 8/30/2011
I'm not good writer, but it would be incredible to continue updated the story, is very interesting.
| Border Line Funny chapter 7 . 4/3/2011
UPDATE PLEASE! IT'S SOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOD!
| Rosalie Lillian Hale1915 chapter 7 . 6/16/2010
This was very good, i would really like to read more. You're a good writer, keep writing and i look forward to reading more. : )
| KimberleeMichele chapter 6 . 10/15/2009
I love this story! Are you going to try and finish it?
| Robin'snRoses chapter 7 . 10/13/2009
Such an awesome story! really love Charlie. update soon.
lots of reviews
| Natalie chapter 7 . 10/9/2009
Love this story is is a really good idea what you based the story on...Update soon i can not wiat to read more
| Lady-Finwe chapter 7 . 8/1/2009
awsome please let there be more, congras great writing :) lota love 2 ya all
| chronicxxinsanity chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
Wow. This is a great story. I love how you've changed it up and made them both humans. :D Please keep updating.
| Michelle7 chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
Love it! This is so sweet! Really Great! Keep Writing!
| MYfeetAREgluedTOtheGROUND chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
pllease finish it!
i'll give you a cookie! *gives sandersonsisters a giant cookie* please! i've been waiting FOREVER! i am a dedicated fan of this storey!
see? i made buttons!
now join me in my update song!
update! update! updat! UP-date! upity upit UP- date!
| NeverAlone3665 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
wow. this is the most interesting and original story i've read on this site, really awesome.
| KimberleeMichele chapter 7 . 6/5/2009
Awesome story! I love it! Please finish it!
| MYfeetAREgluedTOtheGROUND chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
ZoMg! this is the BEST story i have read so far! i love, love, love, love, love LOVE it! its original well written and very interesting! hurry up and write more!