Reviews for Dancing on Thin Air
sholtsclaw698 chapter 47 . 9/25/2012
loved the chapter! you did great with this story!
sholtsclaw698 chapter 5 . 9/24/2012
very cute!
sholtsclaw698 chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
very cute story!
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 40 . 9/10/2012
Three 8s and three 10s don't add up to 57! Their composite score would have been 54! Watch out for that and your tense mistakes. I love the story, but it's getting more than a little difficult to get past the obvious changes in tenses. You need to find a good proof reader or go back through some grammar classes.
Nehnah14 chapter 32 . 8/14/2012
Aaaaand we're back to the underlines!

You are aware that you can check and proof read/edit each chapter in Doc upload, right?

On a happier note...this is good so far...

Poor Bella!
Nehnah14 chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Again? Really? Reading an entire chapter in underline is damn confusing!
Nehnah14 chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Err...good chapter, but is there a reason why the entire thing is underlined? Is there something you are 'urgently' trying to tell us in this?
gerryade.merrygold chapter 47 . 8/1/2012
would u do a sequel plz
Laura xx chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
You replaced bruno with edward! No offence to edward but brunos amazing. hes in strictly come dancing the british version and hes epic. apart from that its good though
Azlady2003 chapter 47 . 11/13/2011
read your story all night without rest and i love it.
Viper003 chapter 47 . 8/8/2011
I'm so glad Bella and Edward ended up being together! Of course, how could they not?

Great story! You did a fantastic job )
IceQueen01 chapter 47 . 5/24/2011
Aw :) Cute ending. This is one of those stories that is too good to have a sequel. Anyway, I love reading this story and hope you write more. Keep up the good work!
AnuluvesTwilightSeries chapter 47 . 5/12/2011
Woww I liked the story simple sweet n awesome i loved Edward Bella relationship n glad dey decided to be offical after the show is done n woww Bella ended up 2nd not bad n now she is pregnant awesome loved it
tessacartwheel chapter 47 . 5/12/2011
When I first found this story, you had only done 46 chapters. I read the summary and I thought, cool, I'll read it. As I got to the bottom of the page, however...46 chapters? I decided I would read them over a period of time. Like a month. But then I started reading and reading and when I stopped I had plowed through all 46 chapters in an hour and a half. I got a really bad headache because I was reading it on my phone but it was soooo worth it :) And I'm so glad that the story is completed, though a little sad that it's over...but still.

Tessa xxx
MgaoqiaoM chapter 47 . 5/12/2011
This was great! I have been following the whole time and loved it! I am sad too. If wanted you could do a sequel, but I guess it won't be the same. Thanks for writing!
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