|Reviews for Dancing on Thin Air|
| sholtsclaw698 chapter 47 . 9/25/2012
loved the chapter! you did great with this story!
| sholtsclaw698 chapter 5 . 9/24/2012
| sholtsclaw698 chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
very cute story!
| CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 40 . 9/10/2012
Three 8s and three 10s don't add up to 57! Their composite score would have been 54! Watch out for that and your tense mistakes. I love the story, but it's getting more than a little difficult to get past the obvious changes in tenses. You need to find a good proof reader or go back through some grammar classes.
| Nehnah14 chapter 32 . 8/14/2012
Aaaaand we're back to the underlines!
You are aware that you can check and proof read/edit each chapter in Doc upload, right?
On a happier note...this is good so far...
| Nehnah14 chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Again? Really? Reading an entire chapter in underline is damn confusing!
| Nehnah14 chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Err...good chapter, but is there a reason why the entire thing is underlined? Is there something you are 'urgently' trying to tell us in this?
| gerryade.merrygold chapter 47 . 8/1/2012
would u do a sequel plz
| Laura xx chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
You replaced bruno with edward! No offence to edward but brunos amazing. hes in strictly come dancing the british version and hes epic. apart from that its good though
| Azlady2003 chapter 47 . 11/13/2011
read your story all night without rest and i love it.
| Viper003 chapter 47 . 8/8/2011
I'm so glad Bella and Edward ended up being together! Of course, how could they not?
Great story! You did a fantastic job )
| IceQueen01 chapter 47 . 5/24/2011
Aw :) Cute ending. This is one of those stories that is too good to have a sequel. Anyway, I love reading this story and hope you write more. Keep up the good work!
| AnuluvesTwilightSeries chapter 47 . 5/12/2011
Woww I liked the story simple sweet n awesome i loved Edward Bella relationship n glad dey decided to be offical after the show is done n woww Bella ended up 2nd not bad n now she is pregnant awesome loved it
| tessacartwheel chapter 47 . 5/12/2011
When I first found this story, you had only done 46 chapters. I read the summary and I thought, cool, I'll read it. As I got to the bottom of the page, however...46 chapters? I decided I would read them over a period of time. Like a month. But then I started reading and reading and when I stopped I had plowed through all 46 chapters in an hour and a half. I got a really bad headache because I was reading it on my phone but it was soooo worth it :) And I'm so glad that the story is completed, though a little sad that it's over...but still.
| MgaoqiaoM chapter 47 . 5/12/2011
This was great! I have been following the whole time and loved it! I am sad too. If wanted you could do a sequel, but I guess it won't be the same. Thanks for writing!