Reviews for Sins of the Father
KCS chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
PLEASE have that dreadful woman conveniently fall to her death down the stairs in the next chapter. Sheesh, she deserves a place of honor in the Hall of Infame.
Westron Wynde chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
A most disagreeable woman by all accounts. I wouldn't be at all surprised if she had encouraged the girls to go. That might satisfy her sense of morality.

Looking forward to reading more :)
pebbles66 chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
What a horrible woman! What kinds of awful things has she been telling those little girls about their father?

Holmes needs to find Lucy and Abigail quickly, and hopefully when their father gets out of prison, get them out of that place as soon as possible.

Watson is breathless, hmm? Maybe he's just been working too hard... :)
C Elise chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
what's a obnoxious woman!
AmatorLinguae chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
Dang... this woman is evil! Your characters are realistic, and the depictions of Holmes and Watson are very faithful to canon. In other words, great job!
aragonite chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
Good heavens, I hate that woman.
AmatorLinguae chapter 2 . 12/17/2008
Most intriguing! Very Doyleian in tone and plot - and I like how you've portrayed Holmes' power to soothe. :)
pebbles66 chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
Okay, I think I know what you're up to and I can't wait for more!

Poor little girls - I hope they find them all right. And their poor mom, too.

Yay for Watson; ever the gentleman, reassuring the mom even when he's dead-tired himself. It's no wonder we all love the man so!
Westron Wynde chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
Leaving that candle was very thoughtful of Holmes - or is it too cynical of me to think he only did it so Watson wouldn't make a noise falling over the furniture? Yes, probably just a bit cynical ;)

An unhappy situation for poor Mrs Lynch. Could there be any connection between the disappearance of the girls and the fact that her husband is soon due for release?

Looking forward to reading more!
rabidsamfan chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
Oh, are we doing "choose your own adventure"? I'd opt for three, as the girls could easily have mistaken something Mrs. Lynch said for a threat they thought their mother should know about immediately and then gotten themselves lost...

But write what you like!
KCS chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
Aw. Holmes and the candle, and then going to let him sleep through the client is too cute, for him.

*smacks forehead* "Victor Lynch, the forger" - from SUSS (?), of course! Don't know why I didn't remember that last chapter. Anyhow.
Msynergy chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Hm, a dark turn of events indeed. Hopefully poor Watson will be able to stay awake to see things to their end! Please update soon!
Westron Wynde chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Well, well, how very intriguing. Some sound deductions going on there about that telegram. Can't wait to meet the lady in question!
Msynergy chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Hm... I am most curious to see where you take this. Please do update soon!
pebbles66 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Oh, I'm so excited to see you writing again! And I have the feeling that this is going to be really good!

Ready for more!
215 | « Prev Page 1 .. 4 11 12 13 14 15 Next »