|Reviews for Shadow and Wind: New legends|
| DrgnDrake chapter 48 . 2/28
The chains could be really interesting and there's probably millions of ways that they could incorporate them into combo attacks. I say go for it!
| random bug chapter 48 . 2/26
love love love it keep it up great story love it.
| TheRoseThatKnowsPain chapter 48 . 2/24
I really love this story. It's amazing and one can see the subtle changes in writing style as the chapters go on. I love how you made Sasuke and Sakura have the shit stick for once for their asshole behavior, and with Naruto totally owning the Kyuubi :P
The only thing I would wish for is a bit more screen time with Iruka. We have virtually seen nothing of him and it seems a bit unfair to me since Naruto and him are supposed to be very close to each other. But that's not for me to decide.
Looking forward to what you have planned next.
| sjstaudt chapter 2 . 2/23
Mah mah how rediculous. Unless you plan to rewrite shinobi history on Jinchuurikis, any shinobi should probably be able to find basic information on what they are and how long they've been around. The fact that Naruto hasn't displayed many of the signs of madness some past Jinchuurikis of other villages have would be ample evidence for intelligent people to see the fox has little sway. Ninja are supposed to be intelligent and see underneath the underneath not just listening to whatever the loudest idiot says right?
| The Epitome of Eccentricity chapter 48 . 2/23
I can't believe it's over. I just read all of it in one sitting. I love your writing.
| zeynel chapter 48 . 2/22
I'd love for Naruto to learnn the chains, I mean, they're part of his family techniques!
| The Epitome of Eccentricity chapter 14 . 2/22
Err, you have the wrong idea about elements.
The elemental circle thing is more about physics than anything else. Take fire and wind, for example. Say you have a candle. If you blow gently on that candle, the fire moves around, basically being stronger. However, if you blow hard, you'll put the fire out. Fire grows when it is fed oxygen. Air has oxygen in it, so it helps fires grow.
Earth against water. It basically makes mud. If you have a sandcastle, and poor a bunch of water on it, it'll get washed away. An overwhelming amount of water will overpower any earth jutsu, though most earth jutsu have an advantage over plain old water. It's the quantity and power behind it all. A high pressured beam of water will break through any normal earth wall jutsu, for example. It's science.
Lightning does and does not have an advantage over Earth. You see, earth is basically a giant grounding rod. It grounds the lightning and makes it useless. However, it can also be used to guide lightning to a earth user. It depends on how you use it.
And Lightning and wind doesn't make any sense at all. Elemental jutsu follow the physics. It's all science.
Each one doesn't just "cancel another out and make it stronger". That doesn't make any sense.
| kazers chapter 48 . 2/20
| Kunohichi8 chapter 48 . 2/19
still love it.
| Guest chapter 48 . 2/19
Give him chakra chains. Not to sound like a douche about it but give him them. Totally badass ability and he really needs something that he shares with his mom.
| alteris chapter 48 . 2/19
Why is the only person who reviews all the time the one that takes pleasure in torturing you Uchiha 2.0? Because who else is going to pop holes in your overinflated ego with a nail bat?
I gotta agree with where people where placed in this chapter Shun. Shika is obviously very skilled at giving people pointers in order to improve them by leaps and bounds. Where better place to put him than as a Chunin advisor? As for Uchiha 2.0 though...this is why he is an improvement over the original model. He has CHARISMA and knows how to use it...sometimes. Putting him in a position to influence the next generation of shinobi since unlike the full-time instructors he WON'T play favorites was a very good choice.
Now while I will agree about your theory being one possible outcome of those particular words being used Shika, the other outcome would be if your mother realizes how willing and eager she is to continue her 'relationship' with you, causing you to be in a tux with a frying pan being held at the ready in front of the altar. The odds of either one happening are about 50/50, dependent entirely on how long your mother stays to listen before hunting you down.
Either way, keep up the good work Shun, but it does seem as though your actors are being a little overpaid at the moment. And here's to another round of making you enjoy the read, review, and torture that we both love!
| katsekala chapter 48 . 2/19
Another amazing chapter! Many kisses!
| phoebe turner chapter 48 . 2/19
I loved it!
| star's dreams chapter 48 . 2/18
SD: This was awesome birthday gift, it updated on my birthday, and if I wasn't on my DS and being attack by cake you would got this review sooner. So Thank You for the amazing story telling. The adventure I have is glorious and always ready to keep going.
And it is idea the jobs you gave them both. It fit the skill set and personality. Well keep on writing.
| dark prime 0 chapter 48 . 2/18
had to stop reading a few times for RL issues so i forgot some of things i was going to say
you could have naruto learn about chains but not get them...theres nothing wrong with him learning more about his clan. better question is he going to start learning about seals
loved the reaction of the asshole (teacher) when he did the 4th's jitsu
not meny stories i've read where naruto becomes an academy teacher...keep him there for awhile, hell have him interact in class more with hanibi...not sure why but i like her as a fan fic chacter bc there's alot that can be added to her, just like anko