|Reviews for Shadow and Wind: New legends|
| r o w e n a a a chapter 39 . 7/13
I always get annoyed when this happens in FanFiction, Naruto getting mad at Kakashi for not taking him in as a newborn.
1. He was like 14 when Minato died so obviously he wouldn’t be allowed to take care of him
2. Why would they let him? Imagine how easy it would be to connect the dots! Kakashi the former student of the fourth starts taking care of a baby that looks a lot like the fourth when you think about it
3. Poor kid was in mourning, lost his entire team in a span of like two years.
4. Who would trust him? I mean hello ABNU kakashi was an actual wreck
| nessiesmith2012 chapter 6 . 4/17
I thought that naruto would of matured a bit, but omg he is stupid as ever and as mature as a child stuck in their terrible twos. Lets see, your life and happiness or suffer with an impossible dream that will get you killed? Yeah the dumbass chose the latter. So This story isnt for me. To much like the canon, with the loudmouth barely trained idealistically naive wonderboy who wins the last minute because you know the fox. And the thing that never made sense is with all the abuse and neglect he still wants to die for them.
| noctisluxys chapter 52 . 3/20
For a moment I thought it was Sai...
| noctisluxys chapter 43 . 3/19
My inner fangirl was screaming, I loved the ultimate technique Path to Oblivion, it's so catchy
| narutohuga chapter 53 . 11/10/2017
well i'm super bummed this ended like it did i was enjoying it immensely Shikamaru is definitely my favorite of the rookies besides Naruto so seeing a story with him as one of the focal points is always interesting to see how you'r gonna spin his interactions with everyone all and all a story i enjoyed i wish it continued
| Junnesejer chapter 16 . 10/22/2017
Will Naruto and Shikamaru be in a relationship? Or is it just friendship? I hope they date though.
| ConstanceJ chapter 53 . 10/19/2017
This is rad.
| inspired-by-Dream chapter 41 . 10/16/2017
This is just getting awesome-r
Sob story back and ass kicking, I still wish Naruto would give Kurama a chance to redeem, course the Kyubi has ego the size of his whole body of chakra, so that’d take a while. I still want BAMF Naruto, but then The Fourth is BAMF without the Kyubi so eh.
This Naruto is also very different, subtle, but still big enough difference due to being with Shikamaru and smarten up and all that. He’d become a fine Hokage.
Though...Can we kill off Aya? She’s grating on my nerves... Maybe she’s important, but god do I hate her involvement. Troublesome.
Oh and, looking at the updated time... Hopefully this isn’t just... dropped...
| buterflypuss chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
;.; i just realized this hasnt been updated in years ;_;
| armydancer01 chapter 53 . 6/2/2017
Absolutely love this story. Wish you would continue with it. The story just feels incomplete but amazing
| slythefoxx2 chapter 22 . 4/16/2017
So you have team 7 be awful to Naruto and when he returns you have one of his abusers abuse him? Hilarious!
| Guest chapter 35 . 4/14/2017
I don't have a problem, per se, about the way things played out. My main issue is that my read of the characters would have things almost backwards. Basically, the strength of Naruto is to reach beyond the base assumptions. When the series starts he's weak, and reaching out served as the life line among impossible challenges by trying the untread path. When he gets stronger, he in turn reaches out to those he could probably tread on easily.
Of course I only watched the original series years ago, so I could be completely wrong.
| LadyWilliams chapter 53 . 4/13/2017
UPDATE! I've been rereading this thing 8th times already. PLEASE UPDATE... PLEASEEEEEEE...
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/12/2017
Isn't 500 ryo like how much one of Kakashi's special books cost?
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/6/2017
I'm not finished reading yet, but wanted to let you know I truly appreciate the time you took to write a friendship with Shikamaru and Naruto! They DO have a unique friendship that's often hinted at in the show, and not elaborated on enough! So thanks!