Reviews for Shadow and Wind: New legends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() In most part I agree with the ranking. But: 1: Narutos Speed is higher, even without Kyuubi. Even if thgey did go easy on him, he managed to run from ANBU and Chunnun. 2: Narutos chakra capicity, in my opinion is S, and with Kyuubi SSS 3: Naruto managed to paint the Hokage Monument and, more importently, was abnle to steal the scroll of sealing. His stealth should be high. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved Kakashie in this part. And Shikamarus reaction to knowing what the Mission is also rocks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it a good Story, and I know more than These few chapters already. Nontheless I find it highly unpleasent how stupid and weak you make Naruto out to be. I mean, shikamaru being able to follow him when Naruto is using Kyuubi? No way is that possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, the torture of Shikamaru never ends! Can't wait to see more badassery from Naruto and Shikamaru! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this fic! it's awesome, believable, and has amazing twists that differ from the cannon. I just wish you'd stop bashing Hinata ( and I'm hoping for some NaruHina, because they are the cutest, duh). Anyway, amazing fic and I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() So glad to see a new chapter! This is one of my favorite fanfictions. Although you answered the first half of this question, why did Hinata bang her head against the tree after talking to Naruto? What did he say back to her in order to cause that reaction? Anyways, I must say that your story is progressing nicely. I wonder where you can possibly go from here. Will Team Obsidian take part in ending the Civil War? It seems plausible now that the Anbu are there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome chapter! Many kisses! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh hahaha, dat anko though. Pure Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter! Despite English not being your first language, if you hadn't said it at the beginning…I'd never have guessed. I will point out something I saw in this chapter: in one of the pieces of dialogue, you state 'Naruto would never have left without a word; "discreet" is an inexistent word in his vocabulary'. Honestly, I don't think that 'inexistent' is an actual word. Another way of saying it that (personally) sounds a bit better to the ear would be to replace 'an inexistent' with 'a nonexistent'. To use it in context with the sentence: 'Naruto would never have left without a word; "discreet" is a nonexistent word in his vocabulary' |
![]() ![]() AHHHH Anko! Whiny is Sheila. Puny is Naruto. Sasuke could be bitchy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm I love the thigns you've added to everyone but the fact that absolutely NONE is allowed to withstand any of anyones shit is just... Naruto being that vulnerable is sorta... neh their TEENAGERS and young ones and SOLDIERS/assains/protectors/warriors MESS so their allowed a LITTLE adjustment time as they reset new borders and how /way they interact with people.. so fine, and Naruto has gone through some SHIT. so restablishment of things is perfectly normal as WELL as tacking less shit even if it will get odd through the anime levels of whats normal to real world level of normal.. good luck on continuing to balance it, although something that is written vs something watched changes the rules so you SHOULD be fine. and YES no throwing kids that are highly susceptiable to messes right into the hell zone but DO mess up enough not to realize that if Orochi isn't THERE with his minions and he might not be hiding out in the OTHER they MIGHT, just might draw attention of all the others! and little teenagers having awkwardness because FEELING and FAILURE and YES but no adults that they go to because MUHAHA no situations resolved with good advice are you kidding? and not as much deep relationships that are messy as before and I morn that because messes of DDDDDRRRRAAAAMMMMAAAA and friendship and EPIC MESSED UP FEELS which alas. but oh well. SO! hope for the sound four (cant remember if you killed ALL of them stupidly easy or not of if Kabuto did his super spy sneaky trick and escaped some of them out) because if you do Karin and SUigetsu... well not to put it bluntly SUigetsu didn't join Orochimaru because of CHOICE and he was a lab experiement that Orchimaru DID things to that was a PRISIONER... it woudlent surprise me one bit considering his dream to restart the seven swordsmen of the mist that ISNT just him wanting all the swords that he is loyal and stuff to the mist even if because of the shattering of the civil war that the specifical loyal faction group that hes still apart of is MESSY. so hopefully some of team sound gets a chance for growth in SOME things with eprhpas Kabuto showcasing the awesomeness of himself as Tsunade Jiryia and Orhcomarus love child NEEDS to be. (admit it so much about Kabuto would make SO MUCH sense if he was the result of the most epic druken seal induced, medical insanity f an experiment during a three way that ever was if he was all of their lovey dovy child.) and it would explain SO much why they all went off the rails and didn't fully do the team thing cause they were all self destructing un top of their other issues about their little imposibilty that died in fighting when they thought they put him somewhere SAFE to live for a while. anyway SO MUCH SHIT to go Hilariously wrong considering you still have Yagura on the loose and Obito/tobi/I-have-a-problem-with-identity-of-myself SHOWS UP to MESS WITH THINGS. and carthe blank to do what you gotta do! how lovely. and how MESSY. sheesh they got some ISSUES. hey ! wonder if Guren and the other high level comparatively shinboi orchimaru ahs stuck up somewhere in his head working out FINE. well always greatness everywhere, cant wait to see how everyone involved has IMPROVED in their subtle ways because awesome! and stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the chapter...update again soon;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA The reason i love this fic, it's so realistic and fun at the same time. Many stories have these intense chapters and themes which really ruin the pacing, so this story really is a breathe of fresh air. Really liking it. P.S Hopefully Naru X Hina doesn't happen... hehe xD |
![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BWAHAHAHAHAH! Anko /and/ Yuugao as Shika and Naruto's superiors in the middle of a situation that was ALREADY fubar by even the Naruto mission scale is just priceless! And just think, a mission going from C-rank to A-rank because of a missing nin is on the /low/ side of that scale! Wishing you'd read that fine print yet Tenten? Oh well, at least you are giving Naruto lessons on fuuinjutsu, while threatening to /flirt/ with him if he doesn't meet your standards. At least you are an equal opportunity flirt. I do have to say, however, that Hinata's treatment towards Naruto is kind of unfair...Naruto's number one stalker of all people should know just how little positive human interaction the poor wannabe Uchiha has actually had. On that note, I do have to note that you actions thus far in the mission have not been above reproach Shino. While I may be loathe to use psychological warfare on one as laconic as yourself, due in part to the inherent soundness of analytic capacity, one must question your appraisement of the situation you found concerning Hinata and Naruto, it was highly...illogical to quote a certain Vulcan. Oh, and 20 awesome points to Naruto for not soiling himself at the mere presence of Anko. Taken from Shun's account for indirectly admitting that the concept of yaoi is his in the author's notes. No earplugs for you though Naruto, you still have to at least start on your end of things like Shika did. |