Reviews for Shadow and Wind: New legends |
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![]() ![]() I really miss this fic |
![]() ![]() I miss this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always get annoyed when this happens in FanFiction, Naruto getting mad at Kakashi for not taking him in as a newborn. 1. He was like 14 when Minato died so obviously he wouldn’t be allowed to take care of him 2. Why would they let him? Imagine how easy it would be to connect the dots! Kakashi the former student of the fourth starts taking care of a baby that looks a lot like the fourth when you think about it 3. Poor kid was in mourning, lost his entire team in a span of like two years. 4. Who would trust him? I mean hello ABNU kakashi was an actual wreck |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that naruto would of matured a bit, but omg he is stupid as ever and as mature as a child stuck in their terrible twos. Lets see, your life and happiness or suffer with an impossible dream that will get you killed? Yeah the dumbass chose the latter. So This story isnt for me. To much like the canon, with the loudmouth barely trained idealistically naive wonderboy who wins the last minute because you know the fox. And the thing that never made sense is with all the abuse and neglect he still wants to die for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For a moment I thought it was Sai... |
![]() ![]() ![]() My inner fangirl was screaming, I loved the ultimate technique Path to Oblivion, it's so catchy |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i'm super bummed this ended like it did i was enjoying it immensely Shikamaru is definitely my favorite of the rookies besides Naruto so seeing a story with him as one of the focal points is always interesting to see how you'r gonna spin his interactions with everyone all and all a story i enjoyed i wish it continued |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will Naruto and Shikamaru be in a relationship? Or is it just friendship? I hope they date though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is rad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just getting awesome-r Sob story back and ass kicking, I still wish Naruto would give Kurama a chance to redeem, course the Kyubi has ego the size of his whole body of chakra, so that’d take a while. I still want BAMF Naruto, but then The Fourth is BAMF without the Kyubi so eh. This Naruto is also very different, subtle, but still big enough difference due to being with Shikamaru and smarten up and all that. He’d become a fine Hokage. Though...Can we kill off Aya? She’s grating on my nerves... Maybe she’s important, but god do I hate her involvement. Troublesome. Oh and, looking at the updated time... Hopefully this isn’t just... dropped... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;.; i just realized this hasnt been updated in years ;_; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely love this story. Wish you would continue with it. The story just feels incomplete but amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you have team 7 be awful to Naruto and when he returns you have one of his abusers abuse him? Hilarious! |
![]() ![]() I don't have a problem, per se, about the way things played out. My main issue is that my read of the characters would have things almost backwards. Basically, the strength of Naruto is to reach beyond the base assumptions. When the series starts he's weak, and reaching out served as the life line among impossible challenges by trying the untread path. When he gets stronger, he in turn reaches out to those he could probably tread on easily. Of course I only watched the original series years ago, so I could be completely wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! I've been rereading this thing 8th times already. PLEASE UPDATE... PLEASEEEEEEE... |