Reviews for Shadow and Wind: New legends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update. * Genta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work. Evil people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good start. I think I might have finally found a good Shika/Naru story. I do think you should re-read this chapter. I noticed when Shikamaru was getting promoted that you left out some " " marks. So a few times I couldn't really tell when the person stopped talking, and then started again. I think you are doing a good job with keeping them in character. And I like the dialogue so far. It sounds real. Like people would actually talk like that. The scene where Shika got promoted, was interesting. I've not seen that done before so it was nice and new to read. I look forward to seeing what you do with this story. ~Twiny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucky me. My sole goal was to find a good Shikamaru/Naruto-centered fic to keep me satisfied, and I end up with the beginning of a wonderful story! I always felt Shikamaru and Naruto had a great dynamic that I wish would've been explored more in the manga, and the plot of this story really gets me excited that I'll be able to see that through someone else's perspective. Can't wait for the next update! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is pretty intresting so far. I really like this. Just wondering (and please don't take offense about this if im wrong) but is this going to be ShikaXNaru? Just wondering. I'll read it either way so until next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story deserves more attention So here's a review Looks like this is goanna be a good one |