Reviews for Jinchuuriki
sierra chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I so loved that poem!
crossoverfanofanime chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
That was so cool! Also the homicidal side of the jinchuuriki so great and It was added to my favorite list
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
i feel for naruto... man... its just to cruel for a little child to deal with all this pain... cuz of something thats not his fault...
MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
That's real good. I love the dark theme within it; hatered and abuse.

But it seems forced slightly. -_- Oh well, right?

I can't believe it just came to you! I try and write poems...but they're never posted; they seem real sappy to me and I really hate sappy things like that. :(

BTW, I HAAAAATE how all the jinchurki got abused, tortured, and treated like outcasts/ and or dirt in the past! THE PEOPLE IN THE VILLAGES WERE COMPLETE JERKS TO THEM! STUPID JERKS! IT AIN'T LIKE THEY WANTED TO BE THE HOST OF A DEMON! T.T



I'm done ranting now. -_-'
Anime Onnanoko chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
really good poem, x
Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Hm, pretty good! That popped into your head, just like -snaps fingers- that? Nice... -grins-
MusicAgainstTheHeart chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
wow, that was, as the girl with the 'issues' in my class would say, "that was intense!" BUT IN A GOOD WAY! I CANNOT STRESS DAT ENOUF! hehehee...
itsstillcath chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Hello! You're poem is so nice!.. That's all I can say... hehehe
90MLLu chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I like this. It's very dark and emotional epsecially the last line. Very good. Great little poem(v)
mgsab123 chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
not bad, nice point
xdistantxdreamsx chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Wow, that was really good! Loved the theme of it, too. Haven't seen much like this.

Check out some of my stories if you're into Soul Eater. ;D
yoyshaia-chan chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
That was quite good :)

I think maybe you would have been better off not making it rhyme so strictly, 'cos some of the lines seemed a bit forced.

I liked it though!
meggoneggo chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
that was awesome! i loved it!