|Reviews for When Three Collide|
| Skimball4 chapter 1 . 8/18
This would be an even better story if you used a beta or fixed your spelling and grammar errors.
| Rose Malmaison chapter 5 . 1/12
"He is still under the amnesiac." Your storyline and action is good but I would advise that you use a spell-check and also work with a beta to smooth out the punctuation and misspellings.
| Madances chapter 11 . 1/31/2011
Hi, I read the whole story this morning and enjoyed it. Thanks, Tracy
| Sparkiebunny chapter 11 . 2/14/2010
Just found your story and liked it very much! Great work!
| JaspersLilRed chapter 11 . 1/16/2010
Wow, that was really good. Poor Tony!
| mykidmom chapter 11 . 1/11/2010
That was a wonderful story, I love casefics. I thought that you did a really good job, could not leave my computer until I read the whole thing.
| Belker chapter 11 . 5/28/2009
Two chapters in a row? Great! :)
I liked them; especially the 'DiNozzo in his hospital bed'- scene.
| GreenEyes09 chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Great story! I really enjoyed it.
| Sason chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Wow, nice ending. Very well done on this.
Loved all of it. Keep up the writing, it would be a shame to not read any more of wht you have to offer :)
| Sason chapter 10 . 5/25/2009
loved it - off to read the next one :)
| Sissy chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Great story! Action, plot and hurt Tony with papa bear Gibbs. Very well written. Please do more!
| rosebud26 chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
Geat ending to a great story! Loved it!
| Belker chapter 10 . 4/5/2009
Yay, I think they finally got a lead!
DiNozzo sure hates hospitals, huh? Nice play with Gibbs' telling him he won't be going home alone, but has to wait for someone to take care of him.
| samanthasgirl chapter 10 . 4/2/2009
Great update. Things are moving along nicely and I like the way the story is unfolding. Looking forward to the next update.
| rosebud26 chapter 10 . 4/2/2009
Loved it! This story is getting so good and the small scene in Vance's office was right on the money. :)