I can't believe it's over! But it was a great story! Your original characters came out beautiful. I just loved Bali and I'm glad that everything worked out with him and Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan in the end. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the sequel!

WOW!there is just no possible way 2 describe how incredible that book was! um,no pressure...but PLEASE hurry with that sequel!

Wow. Beautiful chapter. It was very welll written and very emotional. I can't wait for the sequel. ;)

EJ

VERY NICE! *tears* It was beautiful...I'm dying to read the sequel!

Great story! I loved it from the beginnig to the end. I hope that maybe a sequal will happen but I'm so happy this story was finished that I don't need a sequal. Great Story!

Yee! Happy ending! I was waiting for the Obi/Bali thing to work out, though dreading it too... Even though I'm/we're all still mad at Qui, it *was* a nice gesture. This has got to be the best fic I've read in a long, long time. I'll be eagerly awaiting it's sequel.

I really loved your story. It is one of the best that I have ever seen on this web site. I think you have done a great job. I can't wait to see more of you work. Keep up the good job.

RRK this was an amazing fic written by an amazing author. *loud applause* When I read this at TF.N (that means to everyone who doesn't have a clue) I loved it and second time round it was even better because I picked up all these other little details I missed before that made this a truly amazing story. It was just so tragic in places and truly heart warming in others. Hope to see more of your excellent work posted here as well soon ) ~GN~

My final review for this story...I'm not going to make it long. That was truly an excellent story and I look forward to reading the sequal. You're a great writer. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with the readers. ~Blazer~ (PS:whats tf.n?)

yeah. great story. I be waiting for the sequal. :)

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Oh! What a sweet story!

You're writing a sequel? Can you let me know when you put it on ? my email is: .

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I loved it! Qui Gon came back to the good guys list in my book! And Obi's healing! YEY!

Ivy

Oh nooo! Last review... I knew it had to come and I knew the way it ended but did it have to end so soon? Did it really have to end one day? What am I gonna wait for everyday? Post the sequel!

I'm not the only one to say it and it's not original (sorry!) but I really mean it: your story was amazing and you managed to keep us all hanging for more than a month, you should be proud of yourself! Well, the number of reviews can tell you better than me how much it was appreciated. Thank you for the great entertainment! :)

*sobs* That *sniff* was *sob* so good...thank you very much for showing us all your talent, and taking the time to write this story. I've enjoyed a new chapter every night for the past few weeks, and I'm a little sad it's going to end. :) I can't wait until the sequel, and I'll make sure to keep a look out for . :)

So good... thank you for the happy ending. I will be searching out more of your work.

This was a great story i have been readign it since you started to post it and was following it ever since. I knwo i didnt review every chapter

:( lol ne way glad to see your writing a sequal i cant wait to read what happens between Qui and Obi!