Reviews for Negotiations
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 10 . 3/26/2014
"Without darkness, the world would have no light."

Best line in the entire story. I loved this. Yes, a bit graphic a parts, but still magnificent. Thank you!
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 8 . 3/26/2014
NEXT WEEKEND!?

I pity the people who had to read this as you were posting it...

Spectacular so far!
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
Okay, excuse me for a second while I go take some anti-nausea pills or something and get some more tissues...

Let's just say I can see why you hesitated to write this scene. Although, it was written well. Regardless of topic...
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 3 . 3/26/2014
Sure...

Sure he agreed to it...

(I hope you can sense my dripping sarcasm here...)
GryffindorSpark chapter 10 . 11/5/2013
That was amazing! I've been waiting for someone to do this plot or something like it for a while! I was think about writing one sorta of similar but I promise I won't steal any I your ideas. This was so well executed and written. I loved all the detail and especially the idea of the tree. Keep up the great work! ;)
Allie Danger chapter 10 . 2/17/2013
I loooooved it!
1monster2 chapter 10 . 9/10/2012
This is a really good story! I really enjoyed reading it!
Lachalora chapter 10 . 2/2/2011
Great job, I loved the twist in the story!
Andi chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
Okay. So awesome! I just have one little question: Where's the centaur and giant gone to? But even if they're conveniently left out it's still an awesome story. Especially if it's your first! Congrats! :-D
taryn123 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
great story:)
RachelLermanSarahKeynes chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
i love this story. definitely putting it as my favourites. Thank You so much for writing it
Susangel chapter 10 . 6/7/2009
I loved the way you compared,without actually doing it,Edmund to the tree!

It is a wonderful story!

Congratulations on a work very well done!
Susangel chapter 9 . 6/7/2009
Go Susan!And I'm glad that Aslan healed Edmund!He really deserved it!

Great chapter!
Susangel chapter 8 . 6/7/2009
OMG!He stabbed Aslan!

And poor Edmund...

I just can't find enough words to describe this chapter...It's amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Wow! This is really good. It helped me get over my writers block and now I am in the midst of writing my own fan-fiction story. The only thing I thought would make it better is attention to the in-book details. Thank you for this great story!
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