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dorsa20 chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
Great idea ! Favourited it ! Thank u !
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Aw, that ending was really, really sweet! Loved it :-)
Esperon Hearts chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Brilliant again! I love fluffies!
withwoes chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwww! The last few parts were very sweet. Next story you write: More Emmett humor.
strixy16 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I LOVED IT! I was randomly looking for some fluff (don't laugh. I know we have ALL been there) and this is just WONDERFUL!
That was really good though I like the way it's written.
Sarah chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Well written. I like it.
biggest-twilight-fan chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Wow! That was AMAZING!

One of the best one-shots ever, hands down.

It had me laughing from start to finish

and I especially loved the ending.

And Emmett's ever-funny sexual innuendos were

hilarious also.


Sugargirl5 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
:) Another left out moment of Stephenie Meyer, Bella playing baseball! Loved Emmett's comments by the way... :)
Pistis Sophia chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Great story! I've been dreaming of this story for ages! I searched the entire site for bella playing baseball as a vampire, but i never succeded!Congrats!Now i ve found the site!yay!

Did bella's team lose?
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
That was absolutely brilliant!

loved it!
Elsiii93 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
This was so funny and sweet to read (especially the last part ;D) I like it very much! Favorite!
AccountDisabled1 chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Rosalie and Emmett, eat your heart out - you've been trumped :)

Seriously though, this is so cute...Cullen Family Time is always fun !

Id love to see you write more little Nessie one-shots, like her interaction with Edward, because you delve into the family situation so well and I'm definitely a Pro-Nessie-Person
kikiharuka13666 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
CatherineTwilighter chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
That was so good!
James' Lily Flower chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
A really great fic... it's a nice idea to revisit the baseball idea! Keep up the great work!

JLF xoxo
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