|Reviews for Gimme Shelter|
| CatBeist chapter 13 . 3/2/2009
So YAY FFN is up and no I did not forget that I had to leave a trace of me inn here to give you the review, even though you already read it and we already discussed it you do deserve to have it here. SO:
Ait, I am back for the final chapter(s) of this story :)
You know I would have gotten to it sooner if it hadn't been for how this week have been with work, cus and a ton of big and minor headaches all through the week. But I am here now... and I hope I didn't keep you waiting for too long for my review.
Oh... ouch... ech... oh...
wow Laura got pissed off huh. Well I knew it was comming, hehe... we know Laura and although she held back for a LONG time until she short of... Snapped. Now get her back to Dean and Sammy and patch her up and let her rest cus if she doesn't get rest she will fall asleep and never wake up again.
Man it has got to be a total headtrip to be both gods and 'Dean, Sam and Laura'. I mean it is just slightly (and I mean that inn the biggest way slightly can be) schitzofrenia when these guys talk now and before and all around.
And poor Spencer. I mean inn the end he WILL have to supress it all just cus no one could ever swallow all of this inn one go.
one, there’s freaky supernatural shit out there and it usually likes to hurt people. Two, there’s also folks out there doing their damnedest to stop them.
I like that one... good good words out of the smart King.
Alright only got the last chapter which is only one tiny little bit.
And it seems like I can't leave a review on this chapter so will keep my little notepad here and move on the next chapter.
Dude.. what the hell?
That ain't an ending? I mean that is a whole world of what the hell... I am confused... (and dead tired too sorry bout that, not the story, that is lack of sleep)... but seriously I am dead confused here...?
| rozzy07 chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
My jaw is seriously bruised from the way it unhinged itself and clanged to the floor with a loud thud as I got to the end of this final chapter. Dean possessed and with Sammy nowhere in sight to undo this madness... seriously I am in denial here...especially Sifi with your threat of a hiatus from ficcing. It leaves me shaking in the shadow of the serous withdrawawal to come, as I really do need to know how things will pan out for our boys and your story telling has been a joyous fix of heaven at times. Have pity on my sanity if you can (and hell do I know just how vicious RL can be - the last few months for me being no picnic - but I am still so very selfish and want more from your way too talented pen).
Anyway, my selfish angsty needs aside, just take the time to unwind, replenish spent energies, do what you have to do, but please, please do not ignore that little voice singing in your ear to write some more of this delcious universe you have created here when next you can. Rozzy
| rozzy07 chapter 12 . 2/28/2009
I forget at times just how epic your storylines are at times, till a chapter like this and literally kicks me in the proverbial butt and opens my eyes again. Laura going all Innana on stupid wannabee's sorry carcass was such a refreshing reminder of this and the power that is inherit in all 3 key players. Now that there is a chance of a semblance of healing for her human body I can huff out a huge sigh of relief. But her boys aren't free of the danger zones are they? And I always fret when they are apart as bad things tend to happen to them - tho this time out our Sammy has effectively rescued old Crowhawks butt - but will he be able to get them both back to Dean before even more, and greater Fireworks explode! Chewing on my last surviving finger nail here, Sifi...awesome writing as always.
| rozzy07 chapter 11 . 2/28/2009
Oh my Sifi - Sam meets uberGeek Spencer and Dean immediately is reminded of an affection period in his life when Sam could play that role to his hearts content. It was a refreshing reminder of just how Sam's inner mind utilises information and just how useful he is in this fight. Still it doesn't help our Laura too much here as she prepares to battle her wannabe psycho nutjob.
I have to confess that I did a small jig of delight on the return of my fave sidhe Mustardseed - with both Immy and the sidhe battling to get to Laura hope is being rekindled. Lookkig forward to the reading the penultimate chapter and the devouring the delicious feast still ahead of me.
| rozzy07 chapter 10 . 2/28/2009
Boys will be boys - and trying to beat the crap out each other, vortex induced, just proves this well known fact! Loved how you had a new character step out of the shadows, Tommy Crowhawk (luv the name!) and defuse the situation and his connection to Bobby was a timely reminder to just how much I miss having him around - as he would have by now whacked our boys both firmly around the side of the head and got them to focus on the job at hand... And Laura and her WhackJob minder - I was left feeling physically nauseated on realising just she had become fixated on all things Supernatural because of a chance encounter in the past with Laura. Worse though wasd how she carried it further, mimicking and then going a step beyond in her madness in beating up on a corpse just to understand the damage she could do... sick doesn''t quite describe her madness does it? Lets just hope old Immy can rescue her before it is too late...Please!
| rozzy07 chapter 9 . 2/28/2009
Having never watched Criminal Minds I am still wrapped up in this story, the characters you write always so beautifully fleshed out for me that regardless of whether they are from a different show they still scream 'real' and only enhance the flow of the story. As for Sam, you dug into his powers to reason things through and what came out of it was his undiluted love for his brother...no matter what.
Thanks for another delicious feast, but I'm insatiable and am now hotting legging it across to chapter 10 for another pigout fest as my belly is still rumbling!
| rozzy07 chapter 8 . 2/28/2009
This just me playing catch up here Sifi - late again as usual. The only plus side is that I get to read the last remaining chapters in one long hit - and boy is that going to be a feast in itself... (still I do hang my head in shame in not being more regular with my reviews.)
Anyway lets just think on this lovingly scripted chapter... how you accessed the inner fear paralysing Laura - the loss of her ability potentially to be a mother, to have Dean's child - her refusual of a hysterectomy after the damage done to her - damning her now with excruiating pain. And then you double whammy her by having being kidnapped by a certain 'Single White Fruitloop' aka as Sam's seriously deranged stalker from hell! Just gotta hope that with Imdugud acting like the Winchester boys personal blood hound they will find her sooner rather than later!
| TraSan chapter 13 . 2/18/2009
Oh, you ARE mean. What a cliffy of an ending!
And for an indefinite period?
I fully understand where your priorities have to be and why, but I hope you don't forget us altogether.
We'll be waiting.
As always - loved it and love your love for both our boys.
Take care, Sifi (stay in touch!).
| Tacpebs chapter 13 . 2/18/2009
I don't know what to say. I'm just... shocked. O.O Why? T_T I understand you've got stuff to do. I'm sorry, but! I'll... get over it? Idk. Let's just say I'll await your works, when you do them. Thanks!
| sunnyjunedays chapter 13 . 2/18/2009
Hi, So hubby's at work, daughter is at friends house, son is playing on his ps, cats are sleeping and dog is watching front door waiting for hubby to arrive home, me, i get some time to read your latest chapter.
No, it got Dean and thats the end.
Will you be writing more to this sometime?
I can really understand about other things taking your time, real life does tend to get a bit tetchy when we try to ignore it for any length of time.
I loved this fic as i have all of yours that i have read and will be here when you return. Take care. x
| Nana56 chapter 13 . 2/17/2009
It took Dean!
The 'evil cliffie demon' got you! *struggles to help*
So much potential here. :)
Awesome fic, hon! As usual. We'll all be here when you get back.
Talk to you soon, my dear. *Smish*
| Nvrmore chapter 13 . 2/17/2009
Wow! I think that's the shortest chapter I've ever seen you do... now, on to reading it.
Ohh. That was just a mean, mean ending! ;)
Oh! And you're not continuing? For now? :( That's terrible!
But I do understand. Real life and all.
What is the E/O drabble challenge?
Talk with you soon.
| Nvrmore chapter 12 . 2/17/2009
Yea! Laura's free.
"That was five thousand years ago..." ha ha ha.
Poor CrowHawk. (Fyi - this is one of those chapters that is so... engaging? interesting? that I don't have too many comments... just keep on readin')
Ah! Schades! :D
Glad the schade... helped?
Good. I'm glad the things couldn't get this Tommy (I'm assuming, from Sam's comment).
Good chapter. Lot's going on. Love the reference to Nick. :) nicely done.
| Nvrmore chapter 11 . 2/17/2009
Love the beginning/middle of the chapter with Dean and Sam meeting Spencer. Very nice!
Interesting conversation between the psycho and Laura. Laura should listen... not only to her own words (you can't hunt and be a good wife) but the other chick as well (I won't have to leave them).
I know why you have Laura leave (or at least how that started). Not wanting her to impose on the boys, but... there is something to be said for not always leaving and doing her own thing when she's got a man who loves her and wants her around... and would be willing to hunt with her. It's not like she would have to stop doing good.
O! Laura is awakening! :D
Ha ha ha. Love that you mention the Criminal Minds show. hee hee.
Oh my! Is Imdugud going to show up with Spencer around - 'cause that would be kind of funny, actually.
Onward and upward...
| Nana56 chapter 12 . 2/17/2009
Oh, I love what you've done! Woohoo!
Go Laura! Go Inanna! Way to go, girls! Ding Dong the bitch is dead! Now, who was she? At least Laura is finally safe. The sidhe are magnificent little creatures, happy to serve however they can. But, poor Laura! I just hope that all that electricity was at least a little bit helpful to her healing.
I loved Reid's offer of help. He's such a sweetie! They tricked him. Hehe
Things aren't really going well with the vortexes, tho? Sheesh, Winchester luck.
Nice cliffie, too.
Another awesome chapter, my friend!