|Reviews for Deep South|
| justawritier chapter 19 . 4/9/2009
wow. awsome. I loved the "up yours" line lol
| justawritier chapter 18 . 4/8/2009
great chapter. I too loved the outake so I'm glad you included it :)
| AmberlynotKimberly chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
i quite like this different Jasper, he's more... fun!
| laughing bubbles 18 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
| a0ria chapter 25 . 3/3/2009
“Mother – “ I turned with a jump to find Jasper lying next to me, on top of my birthday afghan.
“I’m hallucinating, aren’t I? This is just like the voice in my head thing! It was all a dream!” I wailed.
His eyes widened. “You’re not dreaming. I’m here.”
“I’m not dreaming! So I’m dead?” Another wail issued forth. “I knew it! Maria got me, didn’t she? Or was it Laurent? Was that a dream too?”
The mirage took hold of my shoulders. “You’re not dreaming. You’re not dead.”
“Am I stoned?”
“Just generally tripping?”
| a0ria chapter 19 . 3/3/2009
Aw, Jasper wants Alice taken care of...so sweet. But I loved this part:
A warm hand suddenly alighted on my shoulder and I started in surprise. I turned around to see Quil behind me, his broad face split into a wide grin. He was shaking his head.
“No,” He said, leaning over me to the keyboard. “You should say something like this.”
Dear Mr. Bilson,
I grinned and hit the Send button with a satisfied feeling. Quil grabbed my hand and pulled me up.
“Come on,” He said. “Walkies.”
| a0ria chapter 8 . 3/3/2009
I love these beautiful, short chapters. They're almost diary-like and very, very telling about Alice's emotional state. So heart-breaking...
| Marrie chapter 27 . 2/11/2009
okay,okay... I so DID think it was the wedding... xD
but then I suddenly realised that was in BD.
btw; I love your stories... I first didn't want to read them, 'cause I thought it would ruin my 'Twilight idea', but eventually, my friends just forced me to read it (them showed me the first 3 lines, and I was addicted. 8D) and your an absolutely GREAT writer...
| larabrambleofbywater chapter 28 . 2/5/2009
Ah, loved it loved it loved it! Quick question: now that Alice and Jasper have been separated, will they have the same physical bond as Edward and Bella (loved how you put that in, btw.)
We just say go for a walk. It does change from person to person...my dad says "take the dog out".
| larabrambleofbywater chapter 19 . 2/5/2009
Love the beginning of this! It's really interesting how the interaction between Alice and the wolves plays out as opposed to Bella and the wolves. I'd be interested to hear more of Bella's story sometime...it seems like most of the story parallels and Alice got the familiar bad guys, but Edward still left her and she still got together with Jacob for a time.
The reason for the review: your non-Americaness peeked through. In the States, we don't say "Walkies".
| vampiricpen chapter 28 . 1/22/2009
Beautifully written: funny, witty, sad, melancolic, hopeful - can't wait to read more
| SpeakForTheTrees chapter 7 . 1/22/2009
This chapter is so short... but I like it a lot. Poetic, almost. )
| diff-r-ent-1 chapter 28 . 1/21/2009
wow, nice story! but i'll wait with reading your next till i got to read eclips
| me chapter 27 . 1/20/2009
haha yeah i did! love it! can't wait for east meets west!
| PonyVamps chapter 28 . 1/20/2009
Cute! I can't wait for the sequel, very good job. D