ShesGotStyle16 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Oh! That was so sweet! I loved it. Keep writing.

:D 3 vIvA jAsPeR e AlIcE! 3 :D
LoveIsDeadMIW chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
aw jazzyz so sweet!
terri chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
i think there cool but i like my sisters poems and stories better soz loser
Jezzvamp chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
i like them. but i prefer Alice's. the jasper one confused me on a few lines. but yea, the Alice one i like alot.
Eri 'n' Ali chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Aw I love it!
sprinkledwithpearls chapter 1 . 4/4/2009

I have never been much of a poet.

I loved it~
Dean's Girl 1967 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
This was pure sweetness! Do you have anymore fanfics? i absolutely love Jasper with my entire being and would love to read more! keep up the good work!
Pixie-Alice-Cullen chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I loved this.

It was nice to have a view of Alice's past.

Jasper's poem was exactly how I would picture him thinking/acting.

"Like the leaves in fall,

I'd fall for you to,

I'd die to protect you"

Keep up the good work!
RedHeadedFury chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
I like this a lot because it doesn't really our right say anything, and it has a really nice even flow to it. XD Its simple and sweet.

cristal chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Jaspers part was...tear worthy.

I didn't get Alice though.
Dakota chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
These are both excellent. I especially like Jasper's poem.
Lady Saruman chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Hmm, like I said. I love how these two poems beautifully illustrate in depth the characteristics of Alice and Jasper while at the same time, a brief glimpse of their history. It pulls at the heartstrings.