Reviews for Twisted
jeanosauryehet27 chapter 4 . 4/6
it was amazing, though sadly you abandoned it
sasimps chapter 4 . 9/10/2016
please update this is amazing
Stacell72 chapter 4 . 7/28/2016
uhhhh unfinished fic! Well it "was" a good story...
john chapter 4 . 4/27/2016
please continue
QueenNaberrie chapter 4 . 3/26/2013
I know you said you aren't going to update this again, but I'd be curious where you would take this if you did. I can see Anakin resurfacing more & more as the story progessed. Dark & agnsty...but good. :)
Zireael07 chapter 4 . 6/3/2011
I loved the story! Is there more to it?
LoverandaFighter chapter 4 . 3/29/2011
i am totally with you there. domestic abuse is not something to be scoffed at.
Dinny93 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
This is an excellent idea with a bucket-load of potential, however it's let down by the fact it's riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. Capitalisation are also fairly touch and go, and there aren't any clear breaks to show when you've switched from one character's perspective to another. I'd recommend either going over this yourself or finding a beta to do it for you.

Please don't be offended by my criticisms - as I said at the beginning I think this is a fantastic idea and I'm very interested to see where you will take it.


kyleenadia chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
Hey there! I really liked this chapter. I totally agree with you on the fact that Darth Vader would hurt Padme. Because he IS Darth Vader now not Anakin. Just one question at the beggning of the chapter is that whats really going on in Vaders head or just a dream? One word of adivce though is that you might want to ditinguse more clearly when you change character views. Its just alittle confusing. Anyways great chapter, hope you update soon and good luck with whayever your doing right now.
Tosharino chapter 4 . 4/9/2010
Well I LOVE this story so far! I really hope the REAl Anakin gets out of that mind-cage! And soon! Before Vadar drives Pademe completely away! :O
Visceral Epiphany chapter 4 . 3/11/2010
the story doesnt need a summary, it has a title...
pJato431 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
so does that mean, Vader never got burned?
TithaHardyGirl chapter 4 . 9/23/2009
Poor Padme & the twins! I agree with sexystarslover. Please update soon.
sexystarwarslover chapter 4 . 9/23/2009
twisted indeed love it hope they can be together i don't like them apart
ILDV chapter 4 . 9/23/2009
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