Reviews for The World Fell Down
Liu16 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
That was totally the best first chapter EVER!
I'Like'Cheetos chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
that wuz a "funny" ending if you get me drift. He wanted to get the truth but all he got wuz (maybe) regret? In some way maybe? Dunno.

Can't wait for more! :)
predator808 chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
wow that's hot hope 2 c moor of this keep updating plz
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 5 . 4/1/2009
A very well written chapter!
chichi89 chapter 5 . 4/1/2009
OMG this waz good im happy with lemon plz update soon
SweetNyx chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
Wow! Great start! I can't wait to
Q chapter 4 . 2/18/2009
Great Story, its quite amusing cant wait till you update I'm dying to know what happens next.

PS I'm sorry about your lost, I hope all turns out well for you
chichi89 chapter 4 . 2/16/2009
LOL That was good plz update soon ..
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 4 . 2/16/2009
A very interesting chapter!
I'Like'Cheetos chapter 4 . 2/16/2009


Disgusting. I would feel real bad if I was the one who made him do that! Pleasuring himself like that.

Great chapter. Looking foward to more :)!
predator808 chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
wow love your work plz update soon c ya
I'Like'Cheetos chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
The suduction crap was GREAT! So funny! I loved it! Write soon? Please
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
Great chapter! My favorite is Sarah getting Billy invited to the wedding, and then heading out before Jareth could even get a kiss!
chichi89 chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
LOL thats funny plz update soon
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 2 . 12/24/2008
Ok I absolutely loved this chapter!, Sarah and Jareth were wonderfully done! I am most definently looking forward to reading the next chapter!

PS this story is also being added to my favorites as of this chapter!
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