Reviews for Pay Up
EO-Hiphuggers chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
BRILLIANT! :D
Rosajean chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Haha! So funny! And I love the Captain's comment at the end!
mixedupfiles chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
It's funny. I started reading this, noting it was well written and felt like the squad and the characters until...Olivia in an eating contest? However, it is adorable, and it works. And Olivia is Olivia, despite any misgivings I may have had. Well done.
Carriex3 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
this one is so good i like how there is no drama they're just having fun. lol
kourteny chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
THIS STORY IS SO FUNNY I LOVED IT IT IS AN AWSOME STORY I LOVE IT
The Dark Insomniac chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Very cute and funny!
kangaleigh chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Nice, funny story.
ShaNini86 chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
lol! that was so cute. I love the brief description you give, like Cragen asking why Liv has powdered sugar all over her face. It's definitely nice to have a lighter story to read. :)
Lissical chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
LMAO, that was great! I especially loved the last line.
Alexis Dawn chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
lmao i loved that it was cute
Uniquely Matanuska chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
:)

You make me giggle.

That was so cute.

And funny.