Reviews for First Date
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
Like.
Justalostflutterby chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
loved this story! :) loved how you described Edward getting all protective over nessie :D x
RhythmicalMusa chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
i love this story its funny and romantic, so plz make more chapters i want to read more of renesmee and jacob's relationship D
Father's Princess chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD MORE!
flyalittlehigher chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
very good job! i liked both of them!
azucar516 chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
um interesting take, but I just don't get the sense of renesmee's character she is a whiny teen. Still, all in all its pretty good. :)
Scribbles111 chapter 2 . 12/17/2009
its well good

edwards very stresy

hehe

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kait chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I agree that were a couple of things wrong but over all it was very entertaining.I think you should keep writing cause I really want to know what happens nxt
smillarcullen chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
i like this story but there are a few mistakes. first of all, alice would make someone look like a slut. second edward trusts jake now and im pretty sure jake would live with the cullens. alice wouldnt screw up akeup either she would be gentle. its sorta impossible for vampires to mess up in anything. but it was still fun to read :)
Smiley . x3 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
Luved it!KEEP WRITING!but i dont get it shes 13 but she looks ?kuz you said somthing about cars and being an adult so i just wanted to know kuz of all the werid aging ...IUV IT!:D

-TeamJacob ILY

BTW ILY means I Luv Ya just wanted to say that kuz some people be like WTF!WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!And i know im rambling!So...BYEZZ:P
Kayla chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
this is really good! I wish Stephenie Meyer would write more. You're on your way. Please Keep writing this story!
SharonlnorahS chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
This is really cool and defiantly not crap...you should keep writing!

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Triscia chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
I like it but you need to write more.
FrostedFox816 chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
Super good! I love it!
Fanpire97 chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
PLEASE WRITE MORE IM ADDICTED TO ALL OF THIS READING STUFF
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