Reviews for Skin Deep
Know Err chapter 15 . 4/25/2009
Wow. That's all I can say. Wow.
jasperslover chapter 15 . 4/24/2009
OH. i really liked this story, i'm glad it didn't include edward from the beginning or jasper because i always feel a little bad. and i'm glad that they didn't stay together after her episode or when bella came back after so many years, alice let her leave again. she didn't have to think twice. good job. loved the story.
jasperslover chapter 14 . 4/24/2009
i'm glad she didn't go back to her. she would have been ruined.
jasperslover chapter 13 . 4/24/2009
i don't want her to be killed! i just thought she should be taught a lesson is all. geesh. lol
jasperslover chapter 12 . 4/24/2009
no. i'm glad she left :) bella needed to learn her lesson. i hope she does.
jasperslover chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
:(. i feel bad for alice.
Nykie chapter 15 . 4/22/2009
I just sign up to fanfic 'cause my conscience was hunting me at night, murmuring to my ears "there are stories that just deserve to be review" and Yours is absolutely one of them, so I had to obey my conscience.

I absolutely loved your story!

You presented the emotions in such a strong way! And hell, what a Bella! Sometimes I hated-loved-hated-pitied her. Oh, and I am glad you didn't pair Bella and Alice at the end, and that Alice found someone else to love and that someone else just seems so cute perfect for Al. Loved the ending!

I am so looking forward for your next story. Thx for sharing this with us!
Manderbeek chapter 15 . 4/19/2009
good story ending was perfect
f00f00 chapter 15 . 4/19/2009
Wow, took me a little bit, but I'm all caught up now. Such a bittersweet ending. Loved it. Very awesome, and unique fic. Thanks so much for sharing.
KatieCullen1.77245 chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
I've never been so captivated by a prologue before. I can't wait to read more.
TheDuckWhoFellForTheLion chapter 15 . 4/15/2009
Oh. my. gosh.

I think that's the first time I have ever cried at the end of a fic. That was so great. I usually am not a huge fan of Alice/Bella, but that's mostly 'cause I never found anything good... but that was... so great. The story was really well written and the plot was great too. ;D
Johnny Emm chapter 15 . 4/15/2009
I HATE THIS STORY! How do you sleep at night? I am taking you and your story off of my favorites list.
myria101 chapter 15 . 4/14/2009
This is probably the 5th story of yours I've read and by far this has been the most well written and also my favorite. When I first read that it was going to be Alice/Bella I was hesitant. I didn't really want to read anything out of the Edward/Bella realm. I'm so glad that I did though.

I'm a sucker for happy endings and even though this one didn't have the happy ending that I was hoping for it still did have one. I think I cried harder reading this than I did when reading New Moon when Edward leaves Bella.

You wrote this story so brilliantly. The love, the passion, the hate, the pain... Did you have any personal experience that you were able to pull from? I only ask because it was so real. All of the emotion of it. Really intense.

Loved reading this and the others and I will continue to read your writings.

lauhall chapter 15 . 4/13/2009
WOW, this was my first Alice/Bella story, and I loved it, it was one of the most shocking and saddest story I've ever read, I wasn't expecting the ending, and I wanted to cry so bad, I felt sorry for both of them.

I just wanted to congratulate you for an amazing story.
lizz chapter 15 . 4/12/2009
sorry, i forgot to put my email in there.

contact me plz. i would love to work with you.

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