|Reviews for The Discovery of Bella Swan|
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/25/2014
i'm enjoying your story much more than the original. thank you very much for the twists. i can't stop reading
| Epic16 chapter 14 . 2/12/2014
SB totally means Scone Boy!
| lostsailor1 chapter 15 . 1/15/2014
Story is lovely so far. She's a very liberated woman but very warm and caring. One niggling complaint- these songs Edward is choosing. No way a guy would choose Fergie, Alanis, etc. not saying it needs to be super "dude" music - but you might as well castrate E for the playlists you've chosen. How about - Ben Harper, Nick Drake, even Ani DiFranco would butch up the playlist here.
| lesuse chapter 28 . 2/12/2013
Love this story! (wasn't crazy about the Tanya/Bella thing, but thankfully it was over quick!) Poor Bella - so much heartache and rough beginnings - what was the girl thinking that first week! But, sweet and supportive Rose and Alice in this story - and loved Esme. . . Enjoyed meeting this sweet, vulnerable Edward, and this ever-evolving "new" Bella!
| lesuse chapter 5 . 2/11/2013
Here's what I think so far. . . this is Dartmouth! Doesn't anyone have to study?
| Liz chapter 28 . 11/30/2012
I love your stories. Thank you
| Emmaline3 chapter 28 . 10/14/2012
I will cherish this story and I'm certain it will be
visited many times in the future...times when the need
to remember what love really feels like and to know that
love truly exists, even through the toughest times.
Thank you again...your words are magical!
| Emmaline3 chapter 21 . 10/14/2012
The John Mayer Songbook: everything you need for the
appropriate situation in your life! I work every day on
'saying what I need to say'. It's the most difficult
thing to accomplish in my life! ...get well soon, John!
I can't seem to review more often; too engrossed in your
excellent writing and eager to read the next chpt. but,
thank you for each one!
| Emmaline3 chapter 18 . 10/14/2012
"Almost"? Jake is such a fool! I've just finished
listening to Annie Lennox's rendition of "Hush Hush Hush"
from Herbie Hancock's Possibilities...heartbreaking! So
this admission of Jake's overwhelmed me!
| Emmaline3 chapter 5 . 10/13/2012
Being totally and rabidly heterosexual, it's beyond me to
imagine what being attracted to another female would be
like. The relationship between Jasper, Bella and Edward
(on down the line) however, is eagerly looked forward
Love the story...thanks for sharing your talent!
| suz12 chapter 23 . 8/24/2012
Some men can't stand the thought of tasting their jizz after a woman gives him a bj. My husband is mixed. sometimes he will kiss me, sometimes he won't. I never make a big deal about it.
| suz12 chapter 19 . 8/24/2012
| suz12 chapter 17 . 8/23/2012
I love you Ms. Kathy, and I adore this story! I know it's cannon, and I get it, but must Alice always be the cockblocker allllllll the time? She annoys me. And I know that Bella handed Jasper over on a silver platter, but geez, could she be a little contrite?
| suz12 chapter 14 . 8/23/2012
How perfect is Edward? Sigh...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
like this allready, cant wait to read more