Reviews for Another bunny
multyfangirl18 chapter 12 . 5/28
this was a fun story to read. i couldn't help but grin nearly all the time that i was reading this , but i couldn't help but feel like maybe you planned the story line out and then lost steam so you rushed the last 3 or 4 chapters to get the story done. it would have been better if you had paced the story and ,( sorry im one those people that prefer 17 being the youngest age someone gets married or has sex at; just one of those people who've seen and heard about some of the troubles that teen moms face raising a kid and going to high school.) and had them get married after Lexi graduated , they could had a longer honeymoon and not have to go back to school after that unless they go to college. you could have done time skips during the 2 years to get to the point that they get married. and wouldn't having Hunny , a married young man , as a host look kinda bad? i would imagine that Lexi wouldn't want to share him
multyfangirl18 chapter 11 . 5/28
wouldn't the wedding be after she and Hunny graduate? i mean sure they have permission since it's an arranged marriage.. at least it was in the beginning. but really shouldn't they wait until they've graduate? i mean she's 16 and he's... i forgot is he a jr or a senor? i know that at the very least he's 16 as well.
sorry just got out of schools for the summer so i'm still tired from all those nights with 6 or 7 or 7 and a half hours of sleep at the best. my brain is still not thinking as clearly as it was last fall
multyfangirl18 chapter 10 . 5/28
lol , this is the kind of party i wouldn't mind being in , though i probably wouldn't do dare unless its Ranka asking me, him being a parent he's hopefully less likely to make me do anything crazy embarrassing
multyfangirl18 chapter 8 . 5/28
they're just so cute! :)
multyfangirl18 chapter 5 . 5/28
eh at the very least Hunny will protect her from his parents if things don't go that great for her. they do have reason to be scared of him at times
multyfangirl18 chapter 4 . 5/28
they're just so cute together , when word gets out that Lexi and Hunny are engaged " sorry girls but i get him all to myself after graduation. " she says sticking her tong out a bit with a smirk
multyfangirl18 chapter 1 . 5/28
well at least they'll match , she and Hunny could have some fun with their looks
shika93 chapter 12 . 8/24/2013
Aw, awesome!
shika93 chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Haha, great chapter.
shika93 chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
Aw so cute great chapter.
shika93 chapter 6 . 8/24/2013
Aw, so cute.
shika93 chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
Great chapter.
shika93 chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
Aw, great chapter.
shika93 chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
Great Chapter.
SharpPointyThings chapter 6 . 7/21/2013
Fufufufu, butterfly rave party, heh, pyro butterflies heheheh.
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