Reviews for The Twelve Pains of Christmas
Mournful Storms chapter 13 . 1/23/2009
This was awesome. I know it's after Christmas, but I really liked this story! :)

-Storms
redit chapter 13 . 12/24/2008
I think you finished off this story very nicely, great work.

I also have to say you kept the characters in-character very well. Particularly Gai and Sasuke. Which is an achievement because their personalities are completely different!

So yeah... I enjoyed this a lot.
Rohan Jinsen-ko chapter 12 . 12/24/2008
Great story, I can't wait to read what happens at the party.
beyondthecrystalsea chapter 12 . 12/24/2008
OMG you have Sasuke down to a T. Poor kid, he wouldn't know Christmas cheer if it bit him in the butt. Maybe Naruto will get to him. You've done a wonderful job on these chapters. I hate it that you've gone to all this trouble and had so few reviews. I bet those shy chibi readers loved it though. I know I get a lot of them too. Your comment about them last chapter {hiding in the bushes) cracked me up. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas, Crystal
beyondthecrystalsea chapter 10 . 12/22/2008
I have really enjoyed this series. All the different characters are in character yet just hilarious. Thanks for the hard work. Crystal
redit chapter 8 . 12/20/2008
I absolutely loved the first chapter of this story! So hilarious!

The others were ok, but this chapter was quite good as well.

Very entertaining, I have to agree with most of these pains. Luckily I don't have a Might Gai I have to put up with.

Anyway, once again, great story.
beyondthecrystalsea chapter 8 . 12/19/2008
I just had a day almost like that. This story is like therapy. (snicker) Crystal
MoonlightHuntress chapter 7 . 12/19/2008
Hiya! I love your story! It's totally great keep it going! I loved the first chapter, it was my favorite! I think most people don't give Ino any credit, she not as bad as she first appears, same to Sakura.

Happy Holidays,

Moon-chan
uzukun7 chapter 6 . 12/18/2008
i love the way you have constructed this story. the misadventures of sakura and naruto was the best though. that whole chapter felt like it came straight out of an anime episode. even this chapter with hinata talking to "naruto" to build up her strength was very well written out. i could see the hyugas being crazy behind closed doors. i cant wait till your next installment comes out. laterz
Idiots-Rule-The-World chapter 6 . 12/17/2008
love the story it's funny!
beyondthecrystalsea chapter 5 . 12/17/2008
I love the story. It reminds me of all the shit I still need to do. Kudos on a great chapter. Crystal
JakeGetSilly chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
Holy Crap that was hilarious man. You gotta keep going! This is a really funny story.
anotamous chapter 4 . 12/16/2008
so far, first chapter is definitely the best.
twin083 chapter 2 . 12/15/2008
cool chapter
Heihachi-Katayama chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
That was suprisingly epic, but then again, it is a shinobi christmas...good job!
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