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BELLA X STARFIRE7745231 chapter 1 . 7/10
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Definitely glad that you kept the original pairings and universe, but disappointed about the lack of drama and tension, it makes the story dull. The smut part is pretty good.
Leppy99 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Wow i like it
U should comtinue this story
TheTwilightSaga4Ever chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
You should continue writing, I need to know what he's going to try! :) Great story
fantasylover4evr chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I LOVE IT! I'm checking you out for more!
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Interseting take on Emmett and Bella and still with there original triats intact. Well done
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Emmett really does know all the right moves, very nicely done. One thing though,Sdward is ok with Bella giving her virginity to Emmett? Didn't he (and Emmett) come from a time when this was considered a gift and not to be squandered or just thrown away? Mind you I do know a lot of young women for whom this is still the case
Rainbowbrite006 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I like the couple of Bella and Emmett. There is just something about them. Awesome story. :o)
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Love it! totally want more
AliceFrey chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Wow... continue please?
Alyssah chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
OMG'Z! this is freakin awesome! i love the ending! u should write a sequel! :D
mschris44 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
That was really good!
littlestar300 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
hehe I loved the way that Em was so matter of fact about everything.

Nicely done.
malmal1 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
hey! that was AWESOME! AND its my birthday on 4/10/2010 and ill be 21 can you make me one of nessie with someone other than jake? maybe emmett? that would be so funny and awesome! email it ot me if you will! thanks peace love twilight


btw. my email is if you can do it and just take your time and email it to me when you can! thabks!
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