|Reviews for A Journey's Beginning|
| Hairi Esh Mooncake chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
If you don't have whatt to review, you usually don't. "But here and now, I know my own mind"(lol), It was sweet and I liked it
| Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
This is great!
| Eyrion chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Perfect. Short, sweet, and thoroughly in character (which is sometimes lacking in these things). I love it!
| angels death chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
I love this idea, because how did she know all that stuff going on in 'left turn' without either a) time travel or b) she could see the time lines. sorry about the mini rant but really they left us with questions about that and no answers at all. anyway love your writing and the idea behind it! bye
| Saucy-Duck chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
This is one of my very favorite stories! I really enjoyed re reading it.
| bite-me-im-irish chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
you are a brilliant writer! Please keep up the good work. x
| 12345jj chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
perfect. just how it should've been!:)
| lillybean queen of the i ocean chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
| Kimber McLeod chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Loved it. And I totally agree about the character abuse. ;D
| missalyss chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I don't I've ever seen someone on FanFiction that likes both Twiligth and Doctor Who apart from me! You're a first!
| Tellytubby101 chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
I'm a Twilight and Doctor Who fan too! I like your ending much better - I mean Donna losing her memories was just so UNFAIR! And the Doctor and Rose getting together - LIKE IT SHOULD BE! Stupid BBC writers, they ought to give the Doctor some happiness! :-) Loved it.
| timano chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
You don't want reviews? Well, I don't review every story I read on this site. Only the ones I deem worthy of discussion. Which this is.
I enjoyed it quite a bit. Yes, the Rose-doesn't-leave-the-Doctor and the Rose-is-now-a-Time-Lord plots have been done and done again-but I enjoy the well-written ones. Which this is.
10 out of 10 stars.
Something like this would be nice to see televised-but the Doctor always moves on, so he'd have to leave Rose for some reason anyway, in the end, unfortunately.
But this is not to say that Rose can't become a spinoff herself-"Rose Arisen" or "Rose Tyler, Defender of the Universe". Or give her another name, like the Time Lords, such as "The Defender", and make that the title of the spinoff. And if Billie Piper tires of the role, have her regenerate!
Or make her a regular guest star, like the Brigadier in the old series. She can return every few years-whether a Time Lady or not, she can still have an impact on the show for years to come.
Whether she's a Time Lady or not.
Sorry for this long reply. I really should start writing my own stories, I guess...
| no one chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
i like your way better.
| DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
so much better than the actual ending! i love it!
| charli3 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
I know you said you don't need a review (and if that was reverse psychology...WOW...I should try that on my stories) but I know the value of a review, so I couldn't help myself once I'd read your story. LOVE Rose and the Doctor and of course Donna giving them some time (because that's all they really need), Loved you dumping the excess trouble of a human!doctor (he was okay, but has nothing on the original- the one who plans on spending the rest of forever alone -except for the occasional friend- the human one could have lived with Jackie (if he really needed to be out of the universe) for all of what 40 or so years? and that's if he didn't do something reckless and get himself killed earlier...so annoyed at the ending)...LOVED LOVED LOVED that he's moved her room into his, so he can privately reflect on the time they had together- keep her close, when she's SO far away :( (I'm afraid i have to go with what Billie said on DW Confidential and believe its not over...it can't be. Even if they're moving from DT to a depressed looking 20 something : )
Thank you for taking the time, usually i don't particularly like Rose becoming a Time Lady stories, but somehow yours is an exception. If you like Twilight you should try the Sookie Stackhouse novels - Every Character is Brilliant and funny.