Reviews for When Once I Remember
Rainbow Manes chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Beautiful!
wild wind chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
you used the word "kissed" a lot...otherwise I love it. so sweet and sad!
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
What a beautiful poem! I loved it!
Sophia chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
It was beautiful, and it flows very well. Was it from Ari's point of view, or the Sunchaser's? I'm a little confused. It gave me such a clear, breathtaking picture in my mind, either way.
TalkoftheTown4eva chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Hey, I really like this! I think you did a really good job of capturing the grace and mystique of Atalanta, and the poem flows well. Good job! : )