Reviews for Pick Up The Pieces
Twin-Lupus chapter 1 . 2/22
This is beautiful! I'm so glad I discovered this wonderful gem. Thank you for sharing!
otakuami111 chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
This is tantalizing indeed, lol. Nice one, keep writing!
Sophie chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
Awwwwwwww
otaku-at-best chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Cute ~~
Ready To Flyxxx chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Everything about this is beautiful. You strung your words together so meticulously, it's honestly perfect. The pacing, the amount of detail and imagery, everything. I love the emotions and i love his you captured their relationship. I wish I could favor this more than once :)
kaji13 chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I know I've read this before, and I'm so glad I stumbled across it again because it's beautiful and perfect.
Seabit chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Beautiful writing!
Puckabrinaluver chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
This story... Is just so perfect. As close to perfection as anything possibly can get. I fell in love with Soul and Maka all over again!
scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
i love it cute and wonderfull and adorableness
TumblingColors chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
This was just lovely to read and made me smile in a giddy way
Damn, I love this pair, too.
Ink and Soda chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
This is such a beautiful story. You captured the whole spectrum that makes up Soul and Maka - old pain, devoted friendship, playfulness, their spats and just the two of them growing up and growing together. I loved the imagery you used to tell the story too. I can really picture in my mind Soul glomping Maka after a long trip on his bike on a hot day or stealing her orange to eat. They are wonderfully in character.
thetinroof chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
God you're sooo good! I loved everything about this little story! :D
2clap chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really liked how there was barely any taking. Just descriptions and thoughts but you still knew what was goin on. It was really good
Darkserenade512 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
That was - wow, that was amazing. Your writing style in this is absolutely beautiful. This really is amazing.
great gospel chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This was absolutely stunning. You captured every facet of their relationship, all the little moments that built them up. I really, really loved this. It was wonderfully written. Well done.
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