Reviews for Pick Up The Pieces
Sophie chapter 1 . 5/17
otaku-at-best chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Cute ~~
Ready To Flyxxx chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Everything about this is beautiful. You strung your words together so meticulously, it's honestly perfect. The pacing, the amount of detail and imagery, everything. I love the emotions and i love his you captured their relationship. I wish I could favor this more than once :)
kaji13 chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I know I've read this before, and I'm so glad I stumbled across it again because it's beautiful and perfect.
Seabit chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Beautiful writing!
Puckabrinaluver chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
This story... Is just so perfect. As close to perfection as anything possibly can get. I fell in love with Soul and Maka all over again!
scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
i love it cute and wonderfull and adorableness
TumblingColors chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
This was just lovely to read and made me smile in a giddy way
Damn, I love this pair, too.
Ink and Soda chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
This is such a beautiful story. You captured the whole spectrum that makes up Soul and Maka - old pain, devoted friendship, playfulness, their spats and just the two of them growing up and growing together. I loved the imagery you used to tell the story too. I can really picture in my mind Soul glomping Maka after a long trip on his bike on a hot day or stealing her orange to eat. They are wonderfully in character.
thetinroof chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
God you're sooo good! I loved everything about this little story! :D
2clap chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really liked how there was barely any taking. Just descriptions and thoughts but you still knew what was goin on. It was really good
Darkserenade512 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
That was - wow, that was amazing. Your writing style in this is absolutely beautiful. This really is amazing.
great gospel chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This was absolutely stunning. You captured every facet of their relationship, all the little moments that built them up. I really, really loved this. It was wonderfully written. Well done.
Kitty Redheart chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Soooo good! I wish that you would friggin write a book like this! It is ssssssoooooooo amazing I can't describe it! ... I maybe I did... Oh well. Nice job!
paper lotuses chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I've never been a big SoulMaka shipper but the piece made me love the pairing wayyyy more. It was very in character for Maka, and the POV was done well. "Somewhere in between he's her boy with white hair and big eyes." - this line was perfectly done and placed. Man I just really loved this piece.
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