|Reviews for Beaches|
| LolaTheSa chapter 13 . 10/19/2014
Fucking stupid. Acting like everyone he knows didn't keep his child away from him for six years, and bella is with jacob WHO also is her bf or whatever and guess what? Bet he played daddy with with edwars child.
Fucking stupid, i hate this shit, you have edward acting like shit didn't happen, like a spung fucking college boy, fucking get outta here with that... He's suppose to be more mature? A mature person knows when they have been wronged and don't keep fuckers like bella around, AND AT THE VERY LEAST make said fuckers work for their trust back.
| LolaTheSa chapter 12 . 10/19/2014
I'M ANGRY AS FUCK!
SHE DESERVED A FUCKING TONGUE LASHING THAT WOULD MAKE HER BE ON THE FLOOR CRYING LIKE THE PIECE OF SHIT SHE IS FOR DOING THIS.
| LolaTheSa chapter 11 . 10/19/2014
| LolaTheSa chapter 4 . 10/19/2014
I'm sorry but did alice just fuck jasper in under 24 hours of just meeting him?
| ginnypotter1596 chapter 7 . 1/12/2014
Taylor Lautner is the perfect Jacob! Everyone else was not so great though.
| ginnypotter1596 chapter 3 . 1/12/2014
You wrote me?
Yeah. It wasn't over. It still isn't over.
Lol I've never actually seen The Notebook, but everyone knows that line. It reminded me of this. Seems like you did it on purpose... (Suspicious glance)
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/8/2014
I can't be bribed with Jacob! I really don't like him trying to make time with Edward's girl.
| jus2read chapter 16 . 11/14/2011
Loved it ))
| Randomcrazy chapter 16 . 7/1/2010
I like the happy ending!
It's really cool that you could make eveyone happy!
| Every1LovesAVampire chapter 16 . 6/20/2010
Awww this is nice! :D
| InsomniacEsha chapter 16 . 6/14/2010
3 That was adorable 3 iLoved the whole thing. the plot, i guess you could say? ahahaxD but yeah anyway... i like how you kept the name Renesmee and gave the nickname "Ren" i actually like that better than "Nessie" why? i really do not know... but I do. :]
GREAT STORY ! :D absolutely loved it. 1000 percent ! :D
| Butterflies-LastForever chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
| EGG BEASTIE chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
ITS LIKE THE NOTEBOOK
PLUS MINUTE BITS OF GREESE
| JuleKiwi chapter 16 . 5/10/2010
AWWWWWWWWWWW so cute! loved it
| everlastingdaydreams chapter 15 . 4/17/2010
So good story, just commenting on the fact that this reminded me of The Notebook movie, *shrugs* oh well, it was good :]