Yeah, no. Not only did you leave easy to adapt sh*t the exact same like his dreams, his gullibility to believe Mizuki's lies, pranks on monuments, and etc etc etc, but you even left in others thinking him to be retarded? I can believe they would scorn him for being weak (By their understanding of strength), but you've as much as had Iruka admit his technical skill is well known and advanced to the point that he's hard to understand when he tries to explain what exactly he's doing. I can overlook some laziness on your part because this is just a fanfiction at the end of the day, but when the child can create a fcking hoverboard and still be called a dobe I call absolute bullsh*t.

If you're going to change his personality and at the same time include a bunch of new life experiences don't do the lazy thing and keep his dream the same. It's disappointing.

me agrada l naruten y como has logrado la personalidad de ambos no hay nada mas que decir buen trabajo en esta fanfic

me gusta continualo este fanfic tiene 2 grandes cosas un buen trama y humor sigue adelante y no olvides este proyecto

Tenten tiene un padre sobreprotector.

Hanabi es graciosa.
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Tenten has an overprotective father.

Hanabi is funny.

Todos aman a Metaru.
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Everyone loves Metaru.

Ahora Sasuke odia a Anko.

El clan Hyuuga no debió hacer enojar a Naruto.
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Now Sasuke hates Anko.

The Hyuuga clan should not have made Naruto angry.

Naruto perdió un ojo a los ocho años.

Haku es una chica en esta historia.

Ahora Zabuza trabaja para Naruto.
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Naruto lost an eye at age eight.

Haku is a girl in this story.

Now Zabuza works for Naruto.

Gran capítulo.

Me encanta la pelea entre Naruto y Zabuza.
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Great chapter.

I love the fight between Naruto and Zabuza.

Naruto hizo algo muy bueno por Neji.

Naruto creó el Kyuubi bunshin.
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Naruto did something very good for Neji.

Naruto created the Kyuubi bunshin.

Anko y Ayame no se llevan bien.

Naruto está enamorado de Tenten.

Lee derrotó a Sasuke.
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Anko and Ayame do not get along.

Naruto is in love with Tenten.

Lee defeated Sasuke.

Parece que Anko está enamorada de Naruto.

Tora es un gato biónico.

Inoichi ama su tienda.
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It seems that Anko is in love with Naruto.

Tora is a bionic cat.

Inoichi loves his store.

Naruto y su equipo pasaron la prueba.
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Naruto and his team passed the test.

Naruto ha tenido una vida dura.

Mizuki tuvo lo que se merecía.
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Naruto has had a hard life.

Mizuki had what he deserved.

A Naruto story where he isn't an imbecile?
Oh goodness you spoil me.

Over a hundred thousand words?
Oh geeze, let up a little, I can't keep up if you go too fast-

It's all packed into ten chapters-
OooooooooooOOOoooooooooooh~... God, damnit. You owe me a new pair of knickers.