Reviews for Nin Tech
colin chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
This waa actually freaking AWESOME I think this is completely unique story and I really hope you update again soon.
Leaprechaun1 chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, when will Tenten be introduced?
Fallen-Ryu chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
HOLY MOTHERLOAD I HIT THE DAMN JACKPOT A FANFICTION THAT HAS NARUTO BAT CRAZY WEITH A PLOT TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD! YES AND THERES HUMOR IN IT WOHO! Maybe you should introduce tobi to him...consdering that tobi has two personalities...1 is a maradar lookalike...and the other is a freindly good boy...OR MAKE A TOBI HEHEHEHE! cant wait for naruto to include konoha for his plans of world domination...also cant wait for him to make gaint mechines of death...

(has a memory of a mech from mech warrior 3...the made cat hehehe...heavy duty metal machine of death with 4 machine guns, two heavy lasers, twin smaller lasers, and missles that blow shit up badly to hell!)

shigh...we can dream...now when naruto meets kyuubi...wonder how thats gonna go...

yikes...thought of kyuubi actully agrereing on naruto with the world domination thing!...also make sure naruto doesnt make the same mistakes all evil geniues seem to make...

1)no big air ducts...tiny ones to be fact lidden with traps to

2)alwasy have more than 1 escape plan

3)dont make your base to easy to find

4)alwasy have a backup plan

5)to defeat all his enmies and make sure THEY STAY DOWN!

6)not to let heros go all good good and crap nearby and take them out early and FAST

7)if you gonna take over thw orld...be discreet about it so that no one believs the said "hero" untill its far to late to make a resistance...

8)like you said before...dont use brainwashing...usally ends up bad...

this is a good story anyway hope to see a update soon later!

And yes explosions make everything better...ask deidera! art is a bang!
kidneysrgood chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
awesome, keep it up.
reader chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
This has some pretty good ideas. Ever thought about doing an omake on a psychological interview on Naruto by maybe Ibiki or...Anko? Anko would probably become a good minion.
RosoMC chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Another excellent chapter with more technology implementations. And I like this smart-but-insane Naruto and the "Lord of the World" attitude is really amusing as well. Keep up with the good work. I hope to see the next part soon. :)

cheers
imgonnadie chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Excellent chapter. I like this crazy Naruto
Raven Marcus chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
wow! I like it!
Leaprechaun1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Update soon please!
imgonnadie chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Excellent start. Please do continue to write. This looks very interesting.
experimental genius chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
i just happened across this story while browsing and i dont know what made me read it but im glad i did, you used an unstable plot and made it work for witch i do commend you continue writing the story id like to see how it turns out.
Wiccachic2000 chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Interesting. Continue.
Ryuubi blackheart chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
good story i like it make more need i say anything else
Dai Reth chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
I've read many stories containing modern technology and so far this one looks to be one of the more promising up the good work!
Hongthay chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
Ok, that was quite humorous. I have never seen this type of Naruto story. Mad Scientist Naruto, with metal skills. like his use of Fuuinjutsu, too. Advanced vocabulary, Naruto? Wow. And nobody understands him because its so advanced. Lol.

Keep it up.
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