Reviews for Nin Tech
GunSmoke2 chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Awesome story, can't wait for more chapters.
Innortal chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Lovely and enjoyable, well done.
GuyverZero chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
great chapter looking forward to more
HolyKnight5 chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Mwahahahahahaha!

Magistral execution...

I'll wait eagerly for the next installement...
omegahurricane chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Awesome! Dude, maybe Naruto should give Sakura some tech, you know, to make use of her mind and make her actually useful and of some help in a fight. Just food for thought. I can't wait for more! (Or for Naruto to take over the world... Or maybe just the attempts. Those are usually good for some laughs from other "mad-scientist".) This story has definatly met my standards of the makings of a good story, and we all know that stories are for the audiance. Some of them just need to learn that no one is makeing you read every story on the web-site. Thank you for the good job. You have kept me laughing my ass off, even though you only have two chapters posted.
simplicity.exe chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
oh you smexy author you, i'll be keeping a happy eye on this puppy i can tell you that. *glee*
Bluesnowman chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Awesome job.
Clooless chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
I absolutely adored this latest chapter, this story is SO amazing! You, my friend, really have a grasp on how to write humor, but still keep with the story. I LOVED your Fate a Lady Luck bits in the first chapter, it had me cracking up laughing.

Your writing style reminds me of another writer on , Lixxle (who is the writer of my all time FAVORITE Labyrinth story.) But, you two just know how to add that extra kick to a story that makes in fantastic.

By the Way, Love your quotes on your profile, Avenue Q is probably one of the funniest and "Not seen as gay to like it if you're a guy" musicals out there today (With the producers coming in at a close second).

But, In any case I'm rambling, so in short, awesome story, please write another chapter soon.

Peace out.

Capt. Clooless.
Lady Luv of the East chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
ah this is such an awesome story, even if there only 2 chapters You must update this, I want the mad Naruto genious hehehe Luv the story

Lady Luv out
colin chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
This waa actually freaking AWESOME I think this is completely unique story and I really hope you update again soon.
Leaprechaun1 chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, when will Tenten be introduced?
Fallen-Ryu chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
HOLY MOTHERLOAD I HIT THE DAMN JACKPOT A FANFICTION THAT HAS NARUTO BAT CRAZY WEITH A PLOT TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD! YES AND THERES HUMOR IN IT WOHO! Maybe you should introduce tobi to him...consdering that tobi has two personalities...1 is a maradar lookalike...and the other is a freindly good boy...OR MAKE A TOBI HEHEHEHE! cant wait for naruto to include konoha for his plans of world domination...also cant wait for him to make gaint mechines of death...

(has a memory of a mech from mech warrior 3...the made cat hehehe...heavy duty metal machine of death with 4 machine guns, two heavy lasers, twin smaller lasers, and missles that blow shit up badly to hell!)

shigh...we can dream...now when naruto meets kyuubi...wonder how thats gonna go...

yikes...thought of kyuubi actully agrereing on naruto with the world domination thing!...also make sure naruto doesnt make the same mistakes all evil geniues seem to make...

1)no big air ducts...tiny ones to be fact lidden with traps to

2)alwasy have more than 1 escape plan

3)dont make your base to easy to find

4)alwasy have a backup plan

5)to defeat all his enmies and make sure THEY STAY DOWN!

6)not to let heros go all good good and crap nearby and take them out early and FAST

7)if you gonna take over thw orld...be discreet about it so that no one believs the said "hero" untill its far to late to make a resistance...

8)like you said before...dont use brainwashing...usally ends up bad...

this is a good story anyway hope to see a update soon later!

And yes explosions make everything better...ask deidera! art is a bang!
kidneysrgood chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
awesome, keep it up.
reader chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
This has some pretty good ideas. Ever thought about doing an omake on a psychological interview on Naruto by maybe Ibiki or...Anko? Anko would probably become a good minion.
RosoMC chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Another excellent chapter with more technology implementations. And I like this smart-but-insane Naruto and the "Lord of the World" attitude is really amusing as well. Keep up with the good work. I hope to see the next part soon. :)

cheers
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