Reviews for A Beautiful Mess
Lol chapter 4 . 1/30
Awesome
whosurdaddy chapter 4 . 3/29/2010
This is a really great story, please continue with it.
kaylaa chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
omg! this is freakin amazing u got talent pls! continue! i love how ness inst Innocent...) great storyD
vogelstrauss chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
omg this is so exciting!

please go on soon!

i hope jake love ness anymore...

sorry for my bad language...i'm from germany! XD
PeggiePatch chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
jacob was so evil in this chptr!

lol

but as usual, chptr was awesome!
Reverie Hekako chapter 4 . 12/25/2008
Dernit! I was so close to catching a good pokemon! o Umm...I mean...this chapter was very interesting. Hehe. Jacob's such a meanie. xD I really liked the part where he commented about Bella's life. I just found that really amusing for some reason. :P Well, happy holidays and such!
wicked26 chapter 4 . 12/25/2008
yeah I can easily guess now :)

i loved the way you preseted Jacob...

waiting for the next update
Dilidilzz86 chapter 4 . 12/24/2008
omg this was a really really good chapter.

thumbs up.
thejedijoyjoy chapter 4 . 12/24/2008
Again, another great chapter. Jacob kicks a**! )

Update ASAP, please!
FlameFire chapter 3 . 12/21/2008
ohmagah!

I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner chaps, but I just couldn't stop myself from reading!

the plot is very likable! i never like when authors write Nessie bratty or selfish, but I'd never read her being... darkishly conniving! it's like, you just can't wait for Jacob to get started with her, seeing her, almost having a heart attack, and waiting for Nessie to just blow at him about how he left her!

I'm so excited about this story, please, update soon!
Reverie Hekako chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
Very interesting. Your story is kind of like the darker side of Renesme's future. Or something like that. Anyways, it's very interesting and I can't wait to read the next installment. Oh, and happy holidays. :3
Infinite Freedom chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
This is the exact reason I had a tracking chip secretly planted in my little sister. Don't ask me why, let's just say that I am very overprotective.
Rhyadawn chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
clever and manipulative. I like it.

Rose's tantrums are well played..
PeggiePatch chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
aww thanks!

this chapter wasnt boring at all, it was really good.

i cant wait for the next one lol

your story is brilliant - i love it!
jj1507 chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
She sure is a sneaky little thing isn't she! Great chapter!

I can't wait to see what happens between Nessie and Jake.

I hope we get to see more backstory on Nessie and why she's acting the way she is.

Keep it up and update soon! This story is fabulous.

jj )
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