Reviews for Worthy Competition
animeandraia chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
This was such a darling little fic. :) In the beginning I couldn't stand Atoli but she seems to be constantly growing on me. You did such a wonderful job of conveying emotion and I couldn't help but feel so sad for Atoli.

And hah, I was totally sucked into the game by that too. I was sort of poking around the fandom casually until I found out you could marry the two off then I went all raving fangirl.


Sora Blade707 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
...Oh my gosh. That's funny (how you got into G.U.). XD Anyway...

Yes, you were definitely IC. :3 I'm sorry, but...I dislike Atoli (putting it mildly 'cause I'm trying to be nice to her). I honestly don't know why, but she rubs me in all kinds of wrong ways. :sweat drop: Maybe it's why I prefer pairing her up with Shino, 'cause I don't want her with Haseo. OTL Strict HasEn fan, I am. XD :needs to finish the third game: T.T
thelittlestcrane chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Yay! I love this fic! Atoli's confusion about Haseo is so cute!
The Sheep's Dream chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
A good story. The feelings seem real enough so I'd say they are in character. Good job. :)