Reviews for Disillusioned
NOTxINx2xLABELS chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
really good.

i loved the ending...

funny but really cute...
I love Michael Jackson chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
If I was a guy I would have a boner XD
hpfreak2008 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
your stories make me happy.
crzy4anime chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
absolutely cute little piece. i love all of the analogies and the little back story with the family reunion. can't wait to see what other stories you come up with. keep up the awesome work and until next time. ~_~Suchi~_~
unsweetenedladykisses chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
whoa! possibly my favorite one shot of all time. it was just so... right. i felt satisfied with the limited information given instead of wanting a sequel, which is how a one shot really should feel. and the descriptions were great. i suck at reviewing, but anywhoo, i loved this. cheers :]

HCC123 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
aw that was cute! i loved the gum reference and how lilly to her she wasn't a piece of gum! i loved this story!
Stessa chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
This was just unbelievably awesome.

I loved every word of it.
My Personal Rose chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Aw, this was pretty amazing...

I like how there was no drama just... 'I wont spit you out'...

I almost cried jst because it was so adorable. :P
liarforthis chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
cute story... interested for another chapter of this story if you're offering :D
dare121 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
oh that was cute! the gum part was funny, Lilly's always so goofy. But I like that, you did a great job!

very well done.
AlvinFan07 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Nice oneshot :) They're so great together
Bloody Violet Heart chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Aw, how nice!

I liked it!

Nice job!
Ley93 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
This story has started out bad ass i freakin love it so much u must PMS!_
croaker001 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Awesome story. Glad to hear your still among the living. Keep up the good work.