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| Fire83 chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
I can't wait for the next chapter!
| clemmings chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Is it really that hard to type the word 'you'?
There is A LOT of grammar and spelling mistakes, I'm not saying my grammar and spelling are perfect but I mean come on; if you're going to write a story you should try to actually spell half the words right.
Try doing something like this -
Amu's POV -
"Stop teasing me, Ikuto!" I glare at him, "Drop it already!"
Ikuto wraps his arms around my waist, "But.."
"Ikuto! Nothing! But, nothing! If you are sleeping here, you have to share the bed with me." I cross my arms and look away from his mesmerizing eyes.
"Are you sure, Amu?" Ikuto grabs my chin, looking me in the eyes.
- You know, something like that :3 Not meant to be a flame or anything! -
| T-chan chapter 4 . 9/13/2009
I actually KIND OF like this.:)
Though u should write like this:
Stop teasing me Ikuto!-I glare at him- Please drop it all ready!
-He wraps his arms around her waist- but…
IKUTOO!nothing! But nothing! Drop it! if you are sleeping here you have to share the bed with me. -I cross my arms and look away from his mesmorizing eyes-
are you sure Amu?-he grabs my chin and looks me in the eyes-
E-even when you are a p-p-pervert... I trust you.
-I stare into Amu's eyes-
"E-even i p-p-pervert..." 'Pervert what?'
"I trust u." 'she actually does trust me' -lightly blushes- I look away..- OK..
| T-chan chapter 3 . 9/13/2009
2 many ppl. and next time explain them ahead of time so ur work doesn't look like crap.:)
| T-chan chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
...WTF, this is crazy I can't understand how the hell this is a story Rewrite it pleaz.
| T-chan chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
I miss that song 2!XD
This is getting kind of random though...
U should make separate POVs 4 every1...
I'm so tired~flashback~ -well it has been a busy week-*looks at watch*AH! I'm super l8 now! I start sprinting and...
| YunaNeko chapter 3 . 12/18/2008
love it. can't wait for next chapter to come. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE ne:)
| Loveless Melody chapter 2 . 12/17/2008
Ok, I'm confused. Is David Amu's boyfriend or ex? Cause Amu called him 'sweetheart', but he said he wanted her back.
| cuteknight101 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
i like it so update soon