WOW I LOVED IT WRITE MORE FOR THESE 2 I WILL DEFINATLY READ THEM IF THEY ARE ANYTHING LIKE THIS ONE!

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It's great keep writing:)

Love the beginning!...

i will be following 2 see any new posts or stories about yuuki and kaname!

You know you really do need to GROW the HECK up. Real writers write for themselves and no one else. To actually "blackmail" your readers so that you actually finish your own work is childish. Try that in the real world and see how far you get, NOWHERE. And, personally, I don't want to pay for you sorry BUTT when you can't find a job because no boss will put with this type of thing. Oh, and guess what "child," I am published. Like in a book, with a publisher and everything and why don't you try telling them, I won't finish my chapters unless you praise me. Yea, right, that would go over real well since you have a legal obligation to finish the work or you go to court. WAKE UP and face reality.

three things
1. that was pretty hot!
2. the way he always calls her "my dear" makes him sound like the big bad wolf out of little red riding hood
3. nice puns in the first paragraph

haha pretty good man it was hot stuff lolz

In this fanfic Kaname sounds really perverted. Isn't his character supposed to be something like a beast inside and really apathetic outside? Nothing is wrong with Yuuki in my opinion. I love the way you portrayed her! 3

I think that Kaname is to possessive of Yuuki to let Zero in a threesome with them. But I like the story :)

love it so much! good work

great story

that was damn good but next story I think you should go into the vampire hypnotizing thing plus more bondage that would spice it up a bit...but I thought this story was awesome and I shall add you as a favorite author...peace