Reviews for FiftyEight Nights
Sarasvati chapter 16 . 12/10/2017
Halfway through and every chapter feels the same. They kiss. From canon, I assumed they did a little more than practice kissing. First or second base at the very least.
amsrule chapter 35 . 9/27/2017
fantastic! great exploration of that in between time and of their growing relationship.
edwardamcullens chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
This was so well written. Most times with ff you sense the difference in author styles that make Bella's personality a little different...but with this story everything felt so real. Like you were SM herself, not a single thing felt unrealistic, or like fanfiction, for that matter. A good story I loved there little 58 night journey!
Guest chapter 35 . 8/22/2016
You are a master
Jesstew chapter 35 . 1/26/2016
Ohhhh, so beautiful *-*
Jesstew chapter 27 . 1/26/2016
This whole thing that Bella has with the car annoy the hell out of me.
Caribbean hottie chapter 35 . 10/17/2015
I liked it very much but not as much as I like edwards butt :-)
Oneway chapter 35 . 8/1/2015
This was awesome! A lot of fun and characterization was right on! Thank you!
Booknerd22 chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
If your were quoting "Follow your arrow" I give you massive props. Almost no one know that song. If you weren't that's fine and I lover your story
Blank chapter 19 . 7/26/2013
Eeeeee- luv the fluff! Second time reading; write on! :D
Amanda Pall chapter 35 . 4/10/2013
Incredible . One of best stories ever!
Amanda Pall chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Tone exactly right! Couldn't be better!
WhiteDusk8888 chapter 11 . 3/24/2013
"You gave her pointy things?" Emmett scolded. "And then let her walk?"
"Whack him for me, will you?" I said to a blink he was gone, and the earth shuddered as they thudded to the ground fifty feet away." were hilarious! Fantastic job!
WhiteDusk8888 chapter 7 . 3/24/2013
I loved how she hung up on Carlisle AND Alice. I was laughing soooo hard!
WhiteDusk8888 chapter 4 . 3/24/2013
"That's it. I'm going to chew Alice out for traumatizing my fiancé." That was hilarious. Like Bella could do anything to Alice. Great job!
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