i found this story so fun to read. it seemed like bella's world was harmless and nothing chaotic was going on. i loved it! you're just as good as SM :)

downright hilarious!

Hahaha... "Go over my whole body"

I can imagine what Edward woulda made of THAT!

I just reread this story completely and was so happy to find a chapter I hadn't reviewed yet, just so I could tell you once again what an amazing writer you are. Perfectly in character you made our favorite human and vampire come to live, thank you!

Amazing! I just re-read this whole fic (it's been a few years since I read it the first time). I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing. Your writing style is steps above so many other fan fiction authors. Thanks!

loved your story . definitely a great ending.

" I love your butt " that made me LMFAO... great chapter

really funny chapter. i love bella's reaction

I love how you write about edward and bella's relationship. it's sooooo romantic

i Love how they make up after their fights.

Poor edward . Bella is so naughty

nice . i love it .

I actually liked the fact that there were no lemons in this, though reading some of the reviews some didn't... made it more angsty and vunriable in how Edward feels. Very good, I LOVED that you involved everything that Bella talked about in Chapter 1 of BD - change of car, being centre of attention and... the shoe laces! Haha; I'd forgotton about those :L

I also like that it was all concluded with Alice being wrong at the end.

Well done! :) ~ Emily xx

I've read this one of yours ages ago, and long had it marked as one of my favorites. Feeling a hankering for gorgeous, loving, angsty canon Edward, where else would I go? Thanks again for the pleasure. So good! :)

FUCK NO LEMON :O:O:O -_-